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LOGLINE FOR A ‘PSYCH-THRILLER’ In order to restore virtue following a discriminatory arrest, a gutsy but ill-fated escort-worker must withstand and negotiate her way through, the next 24 hours locked-down alongside a parasitic anti-social, who evidently knows more about her than she should.
>>restore virtue What's the visual?? What does "restored virtue" look like?? Film is graphic medium.? The objective goal needs to be concrete, not abstract, something the audience can see on the screen.
>>restore virtue
What’s the visual?? What does “restored virtue” look like?? Film is graphic medium.? The objective goal needs to be concrete, not abstract, something the audience can see on the screen.
See lessBeing mocked for his frequent hemorrhoids, a frustrated teenager forms a group with elderly patients to protest and make people sympathetic towards them.
>>>Yeah thats why I stated elderly patients.???You seem to have missed my point.? Not all elderly "patients" have hemorrhoids.? But your logline makes no distinction.
>>>Yeah thats why I stated elderly patients.
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You seem to have missed my point.? Not all elderly “patients” have hemorrhoids.? But your logline makes no distinction.
When a cash-hungry escort driver gets wind of an easy score, his life becomes ever more obscure the deeper he commits to it and the people involved.
What does "turns problematic" mean?? What's the visual on that? And as a result, what must he do -- what become his specific objective goal?? The logline is still vague"realizes his dark and sinful connection to the victim?".? A logline is not about what a character comes to realize.? It's what a chRead more
What does “turns problematic” mean?? What’s the visual on that? And as a result, what must he do — what become his specific objective goal?? The logline is still vague
“realizes his dark and sinful connection to the victim?”.? A logline is not about what a character comes to realize.? It’s what a character must do as a result of that realization.? ?So, when he comes to this realization, what MUST he do?? Again, what becomes his objective goal? Be specific.
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