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  1. Posted: June 24, 2018In: Action

    When her father is captured by the greedy owner of an underground casino, an unorthodox cat burglar must convince her professional poker player sister to join forces to take down the bad guy and rescue their father. — All IN

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 24, 2018 at 9:32 pm

    Why would a movie audience want to root for the robbers to succeed?? What, other than sheer greed, justifies the bank robbery?? For chump change at that.? Navajo casinos are located in small towns;? the banks wouldn't have that much cash.? ?In fact, on any given day, the casino would have more cashRead more

    Why would a movie audience want to root for the robbers to succeed?? What, other than sheer greed, justifies the bank robbery?? For chump change at that.? Navajo casinos are located in small towns;? the banks wouldn’t have that much cash.? ?In fact, on any given day, the casino would have more cash on hand than the bank.

    What has the bank done to deserve being robbed?? (That’s the standard formulation of a heist movie where the protagonist is the one doing the stealing.? He steals from someone who “deserves it”, who is more morally reprehensible than the robber )

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  2. Posted: June 24, 2018In: Thriller

    The Project

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    Added an answer on June 24, 2018 at 9:19 pm

    The logline lacks a clearly defined, singular protagonist.? And it sets up an inciting incident but doesn't follow through with? a plot.? What must the college students do when the trap is set?? The logline leaves them dangling as victims of the witch doctor.? It puts the witch doctor in the driver'Read more

    The logline lacks a clearly defined, singular protagonist.? And it sets up an inciting incident but doesn’t follow through with? a plot.? What must the college students do when the trap is set?? The logline leaves them dangling as victims of the witch doctor.? It puts the witch doctor in the driver’s seat, steering the plot.? Whose story is this anyway?

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  3. Posted: June 23, 2018In: Drama

    When a schizophrenic woman runs away from home discreetly, her family must do everything they can to try and bring her back.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 24, 2018 at 5:42 am

    Who is the protagonist?? As written the logline puts the "family" in the driver's seat of the plot.? If the schizophrenic is not the protagonist, who is?? Who is the alpha character in the family leading the search?

    Who is the protagonist?? As written the logline puts the “family” in the driver’s seat of the plot.? If the schizophrenic is not the protagonist, who is?? Who is the alpha character in the family leading the search?

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