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When a gigantic firestorm burns through a family’s horse ranch in October 2003, the miracles it leaves behind bring Grant, an accomplished physicist, to the brink of believing in something more powerful than science.
Agree with Richiev. It isn't clear at all as to what the plot is about. The logline teases but doesn't inform. All we can read are the words on the screen. We can't read your mind. Furthermore his "want" is a passive statement. The job of a protagonist is to proactively purpose a course of action toRead more
Agree with Richiev.
It isn’t clear at all as to what the plot is about. The logline teases but doesn’t inform. All we can read are the words on the screen. We can’t read your mind.
Furthermore his “want” is a passive statement. The job of a protagonist is to proactively purpose a course of action to obtain what he wants. I and few other billion people want the pandemic to cease. But merely wanting that outcome won’t make it happen.
What must he do to get what he wants?
See lessThe ice caps have melted. The air supply is poisoned. The human race teeters on the brink of survival. One woman strives to challenge the re-emerging patriarchy. When the situation arises, how will society choose to rebuild itself?
As Richiev said. Film is a visual medium. So every element in a logline needs to map to a concrete visual person, object or event. Also, the patriarchy is "re-emerging"? Since when has it not been the top dog in the gender struggle for dominance (or even equality)? Be that as it may, how will challeRead more
As Richiev said. Film is a visual medium. So every element in a logline needs to map to a concrete visual person, object or event.
Also, the patriarchy is “re-emerging”? Since when has it not been the top dog in the gender struggle for dominance (or even equality)? Be that as it may, how will challenging the patriarchy solve the environmental problems? The logline presents the main character with a negative goal — to topple the Big Bad Boy of patriarchy. What is her positive goal,? What does she propose to replace it with? The logline punts the answer to that question to crowd sourcing (“society choose to rebuild itself”).
See lessAfter killing a crime boss in a Miami shoot-out, loose cannon sheriff, Raylan Givens is demoted to his old hometown where he must negotiate old grievances, ex-lovers and friends-turned-criminal as he polices deep into the backwaters and hollers of rural Kentucky crime.
Justified (TV series, 2010-2015) After a bungled shoot out in Miami, a loose cannon sheriff is transferred back home to the poverty-stricken hollers of Kentucky where he must fight his kin folk, ex-lovers and friends-turned-criminals. (30 words) Based upon a character created by the Elmore Leonard.
Justified (TV series, 2010-2015)
After a bungled shoot out in Miami, a loose cannon sheriff is transferred back home to the poverty-stricken hollers of Kentucky where he must fight his kin folk, ex-lovers and friends-turned-criminals.
(30 words)
Based upon a character created by the Elmore Leonard.
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