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  1. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Noir

    Missing – A broken undercover cop and rookie detective are transferred into missing persons. During investigating a missing woman they discover links to one of his old undercover cases and a cover up by his former handler.

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    Replied to answer on July 4, 2020 at 12:50 am

    [Expletive deleted]!! Can't edit reviews after they are posted. And a third example of terminology: If he was an undercover cop, whatever his psychological problems, he has a lot of experience, a lot of street savvy which the department would want to put to good use by having him work **cold cases**Read more

    [Expletive deleted]!! Can’t edit reviews after they are posted.

    And a third example of terminology:
    If he was an undercover cop, whatever his psychological problems, he has a lot of experience, a lot of street savvy which the department would want to put to good use by having him work **cold cases** (murders, mysterious deaths, missing persons).

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  2. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Noir

    Missing – A broken undercover cop and rookie detective are transferred into missing persons. During investigating a missing woman they discover links to one of his old undercover cases and a cover up by his former handler.

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    Added an answer on July 4, 2020 at 12:41 am

    CraigDGriffiths: As someone who has worked for the police, I have issues about the terminology and the characterization of police work in your logline and remarks. Maybe the terminology is a matter of different cultures (Australia versus USA). Two examples: rather than "traumatized" or "broken" I suRead more

    CraigDGriffiths:

    As someone who has worked for the police, I have issues about the terminology and the characterization of police work in your logline and remarks. Maybe the terminology is a matter of different cultures (Australia versus USA).

    Two examples: rather than “traumatized” or “broken” I suggest exploring the idea that he is simply burned out from the accumulation of stress and frustration over the years. That’s a more common and credible problem. And rather than “handler”, the proper term is supervisor. Cops, even when working undercover, don’t have handlers. They have supervisors in the chain of command they report to. So if he’s a detective, he would report to a lieutenant or captain in his unit.

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  3. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Family

    When a gigantic firestorm burns through a family’s horse ranch in October 2003, the miracles it leaves behind bring Grant, an accomplished physicist, to the brink of believing in something more powerful than science.

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    Replied to answer on July 3, 2020 at 2:19 am

    I agree with CraigDGriffiths. Particularly on the point that if a logline isn't clear and concise as to what the project is about, it's DOA. No one will give it a second thought.

    I agree with CraigDGriffiths.

    Particularly on the point that if a logline isn’t clear and concise as to what the project is about, it’s DOA. No one will give it a second thought.

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