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  1. Posted: February 23, 2018In: Drama

    An outcast elephant who prefers to keep to himself becomes an unlikely hero when he unintentionally prevents a tragedy from occurring, but now he must learn how to become a leader.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 24, 2018 at 3:56 am

    As Richiev asked:? why must he learn to be a leader?? It doesn't follow logically that just because he is an accidental hero, now? he must become a leader. What dramatic crisis compels him to become a leader of pachyderms??And become a leader... or else what?? ? What's at stake if he doesn't?

    As Richiev asked:? why must he learn to be a leader?? It doesn’t follow logically that just because he is an accidental hero, now? he must become a leader. What dramatic crisis compels him to become a leader of pachyderms??

    And become a leader… or else what?? ? What’s at stake if he doesn’t?

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  2. Posted: February 22, 2018In: Comedy

    When her prison-inmate pen pal shows up unexpectedly asking her to go on a trip with him, an introverted true-crime obsessive doesn’t know how to say no – especially when he reveals its to attend his parents golden wedding anniversary which he wasn’t invited.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 23, 2018 at 8:00 am

    The logline sets up a situation with a lot potential for comedy.? Now it needs to follow through with a more focused statement of? the plot. Who is the protagonist, the guy or the gal?? If it's the gal, what becomes her specific objective goal when the ex-inmate shows up on her doorstep wanting to tRead more

    The logline sets up a situation with a lot potential for comedy.? Now it needs to follow through with a more focused statement of? the plot.

    Who is the protagonist, the guy or the gal?? If it’s the gal, what becomes her specific objective goal when the ex-inmate shows up on her doorstep wanting to take her to the golden anniversary?? If it’s the guy, what is his objective goal beside having her tag along?? What is the next step, next level he has in mind?

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  3. Posted: February 22, 2018In: SciFi

    Trapped in a simulated loop of Earth’s final year before war ravaged the world, a increasingly pessimistic time traveller-to-be must test an increasingly severe sequence of events before going back in time to save the planet for real.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 23, 2018 at 6:32 am

    >>>back in time Back how far?

    >>>back in time

    Back how far?

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