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  1. Posted: February 15, 2018In: Thriller

    When a black high school football star mysteriously disappears, his four daring friends and their dog set out to find him, unraveling the dark secrets of their small town and a possible serial killer among the town?s elite.

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    Added an answer on February 15, 2018 at 8:22 pm

    I think that in the American context of the Black Lives Matter movement, the ethnicity of the missing boy IS an important element in the logline. Otherwise, same song, second verse, the same notes I gave back in December.

    I think that in the American context of the Black Lives Matter movement, the ethnicity of the missing boy IS an important element in the logline.

    Otherwise, same song, second verse, the same notes I gave back in December.

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  2. Posted: February 13, 2018In: Action

    In A dystopian society where everyone is born with only one wish, that is regulated by the government, One girl discovers that she has many more than one wish, and slowly, the government catches on…

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    Added an answer on February 13, 2018 at 11:20 pm

    Or she could wish that everyone would have more than one wish.? And then wish the end of the dystopia. Or....??The logline sets up a? situation that is wide open to any number of objective goals for the girl to pursue, but doesn't follow through and narrow down to one objective goal that will instanRead more

    Or she could wish that everyone would have more than one wish.? And then wish the end of the dystopia.

    Or….??The logline sets up a? situation that is wide open to any number of objective goals for the girl to pursue, but doesn’t follow through and narrow down to one objective goal that will instantiate the singular spine, the through line for the film.? What is that one objective goal?

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  3. Posted: February 13, 2018In: Comedy

    After a fluke undercover drug bust saves their jobs, repairs the department?s damaged reputation and turns them into unlikely heroes, two sleazy and morally bankrupt city cops are targeted by the dangerous drug syndicate they accidentally swindled.

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    Added an answer on February 13, 2018 at 1:55 pm

    >>>targeted by the dangerous drug syndicate they accidentally swindled.The logline unintentionally but? nonetheless essentially frames the (head of) the drug syndicate as the protagonist because it gives him an overarching objective goal in response to the inciting incident of the cop caperRead more

    >>>targeted by the dangerous drug syndicate they accidentally swindled.

    The logline unintentionally but? nonetheless essentially frames the (head of) the drug syndicate as the protagonist because it gives him an overarching objective goal in response to the inciting incident of the cop caper while giving no overarching objective goal to the cops.

    If the cops are the protagonists, then the logline needs to frame a plot? in terms of their objective goal? — not that of the syndicate.

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