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  1. Posted: February 7, 2018In: Action

    When a reserved college professor has her work stolen by an egotistical co-worker, she teams up with her assistant, a repo agent and a local tour guide to prevent him from unleashing an ancient demon on the world.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 7, 2018 at 9:49 am

    Agree with CraigDGriffiths. And in the original version it's not clear what the cause-and-effect relationship between the stolen academic work and the unleashing of the demon.? What is there about the academic work that can enable someone to unleash a demon?

    Agree with CraigDGriffiths.

    And in the original version it’s not clear what the cause-and-effect relationship between the stolen academic work and the unleashing of the demon.? What is there about the academic work that can enable someone to unleash a demon?

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  2. Posted: February 6, 2018In: Comedy

    As Mussolini?s marketing team assess the safety of a propaganda cliff jump he is about to attempt, they discover that their leader is afraid of heights.

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    Added an answer on February 7, 2018 at 9:41 am

    >>marketing teamBetter:? propaganda bureau.>>>The marketing team are all main characters ? like reservoir dogs.Mussolini was a dictator not a syndical anarchist.? Which means there would be a pecking order, a top-down hierarchy;? somebody would be in charge of the El Douche's propaganRead more

    >>marketing team

    Better:? propaganda bureau.

    >>>The marketing team are all main characters ? like reservoir dogs.

    Mussolini was a dictator not a syndical anarchist.? Which means there would be a pecking order, a top-down hierarchy;? somebody would be in charge of the El Douche’s propaganda campaign.? Like Goebells? ran Hitler’s propaganda operation.? That’s the way things are run in a dictatorship.? The propaganda bureau can operate like a comedy writers’ room, but somebody should be nominally in charge, reporting to El Douche.

    >>they discover that their leader is afraid of heights.

    And then what?? What becomes the objective goal?

    And is there a conspiracy on the part of some one in the bureau to manipulate El Douche’s narcissistic ego to get him to kill himself — an assassination plot?

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  3. Posted: February 6, 2018In: Action

    When a sarcastic lesbian becomes best friends with the God of War, she gets dragged into a centuries long battle for the fate of mankind.

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    Added an answer on February 7, 2018 at 9:11 am

    >>>>she gets dragged into a centuries long battle for the fate of mankind.Against whom?? Who is the antagonist?>>>>her best friend gets indisposedHow can an Olympian god become indisposed?If you're going to play the lesbian card, why not have her partner up with Aphrodite (VeRead more

    >>>>she gets dragged into a centuries long battle for the fate of mankind.

    Against whom?? Who is the antagonist?

    >>>>her best friend gets indisposed

    How can an Olympian god become indisposed?

    If you’re going to play the lesbian card, why not have her partner up with Aphrodite (Venus)?? On whom she has an unrequited crush.? (Hence, more character conflict) And you might want to brush up on the Greek mythology.? Aphrodite set up the inciting incident for the Trojan War.? A cunning female like Aphrodite can let slip the dogs of war just as well as Mars or any man.

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