1. Posted: February 5, 2018In:

    two elderly ladies rooming together at a nursing home becomes best friends regardless of their odd personalities.

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    >>>>Is either one of the women more of a central character?It's the story of a relationship, an Odd Couple match up.? ?I don't think it's necessary to tag one of them as the central character. At the center of the plot is a relationship, not a particular character.

    >>>>Is either one of the women more of a central character?

    It’s the story of a relationship, an Odd Couple match up.? ?I don’t think it’s necessary to tag one of them as the central character. At the center of the plot is a relationship, not a particular character.

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  2. Posted: February 5, 2018In:

    When an assassin whose mind is reformatted after every 72 hours falls for his latest target he will use his skills to take down those targeting her before his mind resets again.

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    >>>?but it may turn out he has been programmed to love her... Or so he thinks.? Or so he fears, that his attraction to her is love only a simulcarum.? He's not sure his feelings for her are real and therefore neither is the audience. A good thematic twist to keep the audience guessing to thRead more

    >>>?but it may turn out he has been programmed to love her…

    Or so he thinks.? Or so he fears, that his attraction to her is love only a simulcarum.? He’s not sure his feelings for her are real and therefore neither is the audience. A good thematic twist to keep the audience guessing to the very last scene.

    >>get the order cancelled, so his firm won?t hunt her, which will trigger a reboot

    A necessary step to achieving the objective goal, but not THE objective goal, so it need not to be part of the logline.? All we need to know is he’s programmed to kill her — but he wants to save her life.? Details to follow in the script.

    Again, this is a movie I would want to see. I think you’ve got a very interesting premise.? Best wishes

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  3. Posted: February 6, 2018In:

    When a sarcastic lesbian becomes best friends with the God of War, she gets dragged into a centuries long battle for the fate of mankind.

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    >>she gets dragged into... So she's the hapless victim of circumstances?? Or is she an authentic?protagonist, a character?proactively pursuing her own objective goal - not some god's agenda? What is her objective goal?? What must she do when she becomes involved in the epic battle?

    >>she gets dragged into…

    So she’s the hapless victim of circumstances?? Or is she an authentic?protagonist, a character?proactively pursuing her own objective goal – not some god’s agenda?

    What is her objective goal?? What must she do when she becomes involved in the epic battle?

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