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After his father’s second marriage, a teenage boy learns to navigate his new life, only to discover his stepmom’s a narcissist..
>>>only to discover his stepmom?s a narcissistSo what?? What specific dramatic problem arises as a result that he MUST resolve?? How does "navigate his new life" translate into a specific objective goal?Having a step mom who is a narcissist is a pain, no doubt,? but there are far worse thinRead more
>>>only to discover his stepmom?s a narcissist
So what?? What specific dramatic problem arises as a result that he MUST resolve?? How does “navigate his new life” translate into a specific objective goal?
Having a step mom who is a narcissist is a pain, no doubt,? but there are far worse things a parent can be. Like she could be an alcoholic or bipolar or physically abusive or a binge eater or a compulsive shop lifter.? To name a few.
As long as she’s only living in his house, instead of the White House what’s to worry about?
There might be a good drama here. Or even a comedy.? But I think the conflict and the stakes need focus and amplification.
fwiw
See lessWhen a Data Courier wakes up in a French hospital with no idea how he got there, he must finish his delivery that may prevent or start a war, only he can?t remember whose side he?s on.
>>>he must finish his delivery that may prevent or start a war, Needs a ticking clock.
>>>he must finish his delivery that may prevent or start a war,
Needs a ticking clock.
See lessA Brainwashed boy genius is busted out of his facility and joins the fight against the corporate system that taught him to win at all costs.
As noted by the others, the plot seems vague. And although his goal may change, his character arc doesn't seem to. He's still trying to win at all costs, isn't he?? Only now to take down the Big Bad Corporate System instead of uphold it. Different objective -- same predicate.
As noted by the others, the plot seems vague.
And although his goal may change, his character arc doesn’t seem to. He’s still trying to win at all costs, isn’t he?? Only now to take down the Big Bad Corporate System instead of uphold it. Different objective — same predicate.
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