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Alas, the logline does not conform to two fundamental requirements for an industry acceptable logline.1]At 50 words it is too long.2]?The logline? seems to present a plot with two spines, two courses of dramatic action.? It has the protagonist pursuing one objective goal -- then switching to anotherRead more
Alas, the logline does not conform to two fundamental requirements for an industry acceptable logline.
1]At 50 words it is too long.
2]?The logline? seems to present a plot with two spines, two courses of dramatic action.? It has the protagonist pursuing one objective goal — then switching to another objective goal.? This violates the ironclad principle that a?plot must have unity of action wherein the protagonist pursues one? –and only one — overarching objective goal.? What is the singular unity of action in this story?? What is the overarching objective goal of the protagonist that frames, organizes and drives the story?
I suggest you study the guidelines under “Formula” (at the top of the web page) for composing an industry standard logline.
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The logline sets up a situation with lots of possibilities for conflict.? However, declaring a rupture in the relationship is not enough to round out a logline.? A logline needs to state a course dramatic action that results from the rupture.What becomes the protagonist's objective goal -- his act oRead more
The logline sets up a situation with lots of possibilities for conflict.? However, declaring a rupture in the relationship is not enough to round out a logline.? A logline needs to state a course dramatic action that results from the rupture.
What becomes the protagonist’s objective goal — his act of revenge or spite (I presume)?
And is there a sole protagonist or is this the story of “dueling” dual protagonists?
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The plot line seems similar to "Money Monster" (2016).
The plot line seems similar to “Money Monster” (2016).
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