1. Posted: December 29, 2017In:

    In a rural town, when a young, na?ve wife of an older, powerful cult leader becomes a secret prostitute, she discovers the town’s and cult’s dirty dark secrets that empower her to create a sex empire.

    dpg Singularity

    I agree with Nir Shelter that all the elements don't seem to connect in a credible cause-and-effect chain of events.? And I also agree that she could just as well take a lover or several to solve her problem of sexual frustration.? I don't see why the only remedy is for her to become a prostitute.?Read more

    I agree with Nir Shelter that all the elements don’t seem to connect in a credible cause-and-effect chain of events.? And I also agree that she could just as well take a lover or several to solve her problem of sexual frustration.? I don’t see why the only remedy is for her to become a prostitute.? Or how prostitute can constitute a remedy for her sexual frustration.

    And if she’s brazen enough to become a prostitute, why isn’t she brazen enough to also leave her husband, leave the cult?

    IOW: in my calculus, the motivational math just doesn’t add up.

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: December 29, 2017In:

    possible rites of passage “the masterpiece”

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    dpg Singularity

    I concur with Nir Shelter on the issue of significant stakes that would emotionally invest an audience in the outcome.Also: >>>this is a Hollywood insider story and most producers hate/avoid reading these kinds of scripts.Particularly from outsiders.? It takes an insider to know what it's lRead more

    I concur with Nir Shelter on the issue of significant stakes that would emotionally invest an audience in the outcome.

    Also:
    >>>this is a Hollywood insider story and most producers hate/avoid reading these kinds of scripts.

    Particularly from outsiders.? It takes an insider to know what it’s like to be an insider.

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  3. Posted: December 31, 2017In:

    possible sci-fi thriller “the ghost of past and future”

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    dpg Singularity

    >>>?managing the linearity of his continuum Huh?? What does that mean? Film is a visual medium.? Therefore, it's imperative that a logline? should describe a plot that can be visualized in the mind's eye of the reader.? Even if only as a sketch. I, for one, am unable to form even a sketchyRead more

    >>>?managing the linearity of his continuum

    Huh?? What does that mean?

    Film is a visual medium.? Therefore, it’s imperative that a logline? should describe a plot that can be visualized in the mind’s eye of the reader.? Even if only as a sketch.

    I, for one, am unable to form even a sketchy visual for? “managing the linearity of his continuum”.

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