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  1. Posted: October 27, 2017In: Family

    Impeached president moves back to her hometown in disgrace to pursue a new dream: balancing family life….while grooming her shy and nerdy kids for careers in politics.

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    Added an answer on October 28, 2017 at 5:27 am

    It's hard to see how this is a story that can be categorized as a family genre film.? A family genre film is one that would not offend preteens (or more particularly the parents of preteens).? It is also a film with characters and themes that would appeal to preteens.? ?And there parents? (Like a PiRead more

    It’s hard to see how this is a story that can be categorized as a family genre film.? A family genre film is one that would not offend preteens (or more particularly the parents of preteens).? It is also a film with characters and themes that would appeal to preteens.? ?And there parents? (Like a Pixar film.)

    Why would preteens be interested in — let alone understand — the legal details — of impeachment?? Or a parent grooming her older than pre-teen kids for politics?

    In addition, the current political reality in the US is more interesting and more dramatic that could be conjured up in any political fiction.? Certainly by a fictional character seeking to “balance family life”? –where’s the tension, conflict, controversy in being balanced?? The very essence of drama is life and characters out of balance.?

    In drama, balance = boring.

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  2. Posted: October 28, 2017In: Horror

    After a curse warning, a defiant Napoleon fires cannon blasting the nose off Sphinx of Giza: realizing his troop are dying strangely one by one, he battles to unravel the curse of its invisible revenging guardian demon

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    Added an answer on October 28, 2017 at 4:57 am

    The logline seems to cast the demon in the role of the protagonist.? And taking the logline at face value, the? plot seems to promise a lot of violence -- but no suspense.? That is, it's never in doubt that the demon will be able to inflict revenge whenever and on whomever it pleases.? It is never iRead more

    The logline seems to cast the demon in the role of the protagonist.? And taking the logline at face value, the? plot seems to promise a lot of violence — but no suspense.? That is, it’s never in doubt that the demon will be able to inflict revenge whenever and on whomever it pleases.? It is never in doubt that Napoleon is doomed.

    Yet one of the expectations of the thriller genre — the? definition of? word “thriller” itself — is that it is a story that will maintain viewer interest by providing suspense,? lots of suspense.

    So where’s the suspense?

    And where is there is a character for the audience to root for?? Other than some French viewers, perhaps, why would anyone root for Napoleon?? And the demon is certainly not a character for an audience to root for because 1] he’s not human; 2] he’s not nice–he’s violent, vengeful and merciless.

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  3. Posted: October 27, 2017In: Drama

    In 1975, when the US Air Force proudly announces its “first” female pilots, a housewife with a classified past must rally the remaining women of the WW2-era WASP corps to finally gain military recognition as the original female flyboys, before they are erased from history.

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    Added an answer on October 27, 2017 at 8:31 pm

    Is this based upon or inspired by a real events (including the main character)?(And is it really accurate to say the original female pilots would? be erased?? Is it not more likely? the case that their contribution is being ignored, relegated to obscurity?)

    Is this based upon or inspired by a real events (including the main character)?

    (And is it really accurate to say the original female pilots would? be erased?? Is it not more likely? the case that their contribution is being ignored, relegated to obscurity?)

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