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A confident police chief in a small Texas Hill Country town discovers his entire life has been based on lies and deception, and he must unravel the truth and confront the past or risk losing his job, his family, and his sanity.
Ruthie: For the sake of continuity of discussion, please post changes under the thread of the original logline rather than posting a whole new logline. That said, the revised version doesn't seem to ?address any of the issues raised by posters in the original version.
Ruthie:
For the sake of continuity of discussion, please post changes under the thread of the original logline rather than posting a whole new logline.
That said, the revised version doesn’t seem to ?address any of the issues raised by posters in the original version.
See lessAfter a young businessman is told that he is a loser and his life is lonely and meaningless, he must discover what makes an individual feel loved in order to give his life more purpose.
As CraigDGriffiths said, you have to reveal the major plots points as outlined in the "Formula" tab.?Loglining is not about hide and seek. ?It's about show and tell. ?Your story is competing for eyeballs, trying to stand out in a crowd of thousands of other ideas jostling for attention. ?You only haRead more
As CraigDGriffiths said, you have to reveal the major plots points as outlined in the “Formula” tab.?Loglining is not about hide and seek. ?It’s about show and tell. ?Your story is competing for eyeballs, trying to stand out in a crowd of thousands of other ideas jostling for attention. ?You only have a few seconds to grab that attention.?A logline is a one sentence sales pitch.
See lessAfter a young businessman is told that he is a loser and his life is lonely and meaningless, he must discover what makes an individual feel loved in order to give his life more purpose.
And what exactly does he do to discover "what makes..."? ?What's the visual? Once again, film is a visual medium. What's the visual for "love" and "meaning" in his life? ?What does that scene look like?There are a 10,001+ ways a person can find love and a meaningful life. ?What is the specific way hRead more
And what exactly does he do to discover “what makes…”? ?What’s the visual? Once again, film is a visual medium. What’s the visual for “love” and “meaning” in his life? ?What does that scene look like?
There are a 10,001+ ways a person can find love and a meaningful life. ?What is the specific way he chooses?
IOW: ?what’s the plot? ?What does he try to do to find love and meaning in his life? ?To prove everyone is wrong about him?
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