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All the King’s Women- When they become fed up with being one of the king’s many “fair maidens”, three wenches conspire to kill him, but when the queen dies and the king announces his plan to remarry, the three turn on each other as they vie to be the next lady of royalty.
Whatever.I'm just saying that the reversal the wenches undergo, from conspiring to killing the king, to vying to wed him, is a great way to boot up the story.The ?dialectic, the yin /yang, ?the systole-diastole beat of all comedy and drama ?is reversal. ?Reversal of fortune. Reversal of intention. ?Read more
Whatever.
I’m just saying that the reversal the wenches undergo, from conspiring to killing the king, to vying to wed him, is a great way to boot up the story.
The ?dialectic, the yin /yang, ?the systole-diastole beat of all comedy and drama ?is reversal. ?Reversal of fortune. Reversal of intention. ?Reversal of relationship.
And this story sets up the strongest reversals possible — 180 degree whiplash-inducing reversals of fortune, intent and relationship. ?Properly executed, it s a winning combination of reversals.
See lessVowlence Rewrite: After falling for another woman and in love with having choice, a rogue “constructed” husband must battle his original creator and society’s hell-bent effort to maintain matrimony’s perfect success rate, in his driven pursuit of true love.
So it's a story about "Stepford Husbands" instead of "Stepford Wives" (Original movie in 1975, remade in 2004).>>>>another woman and in love with having choiceIsn't the concept of preferring to have a choice is implicit in falling in love with another woman? ?I don't think the logline neRead more
So it’s a story about “Stepford Husbands” instead of “Stepford Wives” (Original movie in 1975, remade in 2004).
>>>>another woman and in love with having choice
Isn’t the concept of preferring to have a choice is implicit in falling in love with another woman? ?I don’t think the logline needs mention it. I think the logline focus on the characters ?not concept
Well, it’s an interesting situation. ?But what is the plot that follows from the situation? ?That is, after falling in love with another woman, what does he do about it? ?What becomes his objective goal? ?”Battle his creator and society..” — well, obviously he must. ?But how? What becomes his specific plan for “battling” his wife and society?
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As Dkpough1 said. ?At 85 words this is w-a-y too long for a logline. ?Please consult the guidelines under "Formula" at the top of the web page.
As Dkpough1 said. ?At 85 words this is w-a-y too long for a logline. ?Please consult the guidelines under “Formula” at the top of the web page.
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