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Facing hard time for an unpaid debt, an unorthodox street busker races to find the most spectacular way to bring his piano music to the attention of Europe?s most famous manager before it?s too late ? inspired by a true event.
>>>facing hard time... before it's too late. When is it "too late"?? How much time is left on the ticking clock?? A week, 48 hours, or...?? A ticking clock is always a good feature in a plot and logline.? But a logline can be strengthened by being specific on the deadline the protagonist faRead more
>>>facing hard time… before it’s too late.
When is it “too late”?? How much time is left on the ticking clock?? A week, 48 hours, or…?? A ticking clock is always a good feature in a plot and logline.? But a logline can be strengthened by being specific on the deadline the protagonist faces.? (And how much hard time does he face?)
One question I have is about his facing hard time for a debt.? I thought debtor’s prisons in modern economies were a thing of the past.? In what country and in what time period does the story take place?
See lessAfter awakening from a ten-year coma, a wise-cracking gay wheelchair-bound French assassin discovers his arch-nemesis, the psychotic Jameson Juicer, murdered his family, to seek revenge he must sneak into the 13 story-Juicer-compound filled with hundreds of cut-throats, and absolutely no handicap accessibility.
A wheelchair-bound assassin must avenge the death of his family. That's the core concept? distilled down from 42 words (which is too long) to 10 (high concept length).? And the story hook is that he's a paraplegic assassin.? Except I'm not sure whether he became wheelchair-bound as a casualty of beiRead more
A wheelchair-bound assassin must avenge the death of his family.
That’s the core concept? distilled down from 42 words (which is too long) to 10 (high concept length).? And the story hook is that he’s a paraplegic assassin.? Except I’m not sure whether he became wheelchair-bound as a casualty of being an assassin? Or? that he had a successful career as assassin in spite of being a paraplegic? Please clarify.
(And there is no need to mention proper names in a logline. )
See lessAfter a great war in Averia, a former female assassin seeking redemption is taken under the wing by a noble family, where she must learn to navigate high society while keeping her real identity a secret from the people that hunt her.
Frankly, I think her past, her harrowing career as an assassin, would be more interesting than her struggles to escape that past by hiding out in high society.? The premise? in this logline is more suitable for a sequel.? First write an origin story.Just saying.?
Frankly, I think her past, her harrowing career as an assassin, would be more interesting than her struggles to escape that past by hiding out in high society.? The premise? in this logline is more suitable for a sequel.? First write an origin story.
Just saying.
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