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A suspended detective confronts his long-buried past investigating an unsolved murder that forces him to face himself, to his end or a cathartic answer for the murder girl and himself.
As Richiev said. ?The inciting incident ?needs to answer ?the question, "Why must he investigate this unsolved murder NOW, after all these years?" ?It's?not clear that the suspension is the inciting incident nor why it is. ?Why didn't he or couldn't he pursue it earlier?
As Richiev said. ?The inciting incident ?needs to answer ?the question, “Why must he investigate this unsolved murder NOW, after all these years?” ?It’s?not clear that the suspension is the inciting incident nor why it is. ?Why didn’t he or couldn’t he pursue it earlier?
See lessDue to imminent war conflict between magisterial government and local guerilla party, local man joins rebels on life-risking mission for exchange of safe passage for him and his pregnant wife out of the quarantined town.
Where is the story set? In the Middle East, Syria, Iraq, Afghanistan? ?In Central America? ?Africa?That's not a small detail to be worked out later. ?It's a critical detail that needs to be embedded in the logline.
Where is the story set? In the Middle East, Syria, Iraq, Afghanistan? ?In Central America? ?Africa?
That’s not a small detail to be worked out later. ?It’s a critical detail that needs to be embedded in the logline.
See lessInspired by actual events, a Chicago man from a tough Chicago neighbor joins the Armed Forces, landing on D-Day +5, surviving the savagery of the Battle of Bastogne and guarding one of the Nazi’s Luftwaffe Commander, Herman Goering at Nuremburg.
So it's biopic. ?But is it a bioepic? Or just the story of a GI who survives the horrors of war by sheer luck and circumstance, through no particular heroic skill or effort of his own?I dunno. ? ? Most of the people who could have identified with his experience, emotionally invest in his predicamentRead more
So it’s biopic. ?But is it a bioepic? Or just the story of a GI who survives the horrors of war by sheer luck and circumstance, through no particular heroic skill or effort of his own?
I dunno. ? ? Most of the people who could have identified with his experience, emotionally invest in his predicament — WW 2 vets — are dead. ?How does this story connect to a modern audience, most of whom have never felt the sting of battle, have no intention or need to do so??What is the story hook for a contemporary movie audience?
And the description in this logline looks like a string of pearls, a concatenation of interesting, colorful incidents. ?But a string of pearls is not the same as a plot.
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