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When a mission goes wrong a star ship crew are stranded in the distant future where artificial intelligence is consuming the galaxy. Lost in this chaotic realm the world weary captain and his inexperienced crew must form allegiances and negotiate deals with other species which will at times severely test their ethics and values.
Agree with Foxtrot25. ?The logline needs to be framed in terms of their ultimate objective goal. ?To what end is their wheeling and dealing and negotiate alliances? ?Well, in the short term to merely survive, of course. ?But their long term objective goal, hence, the overarching goal of the series,Read more
Agree with Foxtrot25. ?The logline needs to be framed in terms of their ultimate objective goal. ?To what end is their wheeling and dealing and negotiate alliances? ?Well, in the short term to merely survive, of course. ?But their long term objective goal, hence, the overarching goal of the series, is to get back home, isn’t it?
See lessBruce Ismay was ontop of the world until he took one single step off the doomed RMS Titanic and fought the rest of his life to save its memory and his legacy
This appears to be a biopic based upon the real life character of the chairman of the cruise line that built the ill-fated Titanic. ?He was on that fateful maiden voyage and survived while hundreds of less privileged people perished. ?That he didn't do the noble thing and go down with the ship doggeRead more
This appears to be a biopic based upon the real life character of the chairman of the cruise line that built the ill-fated Titanic. ?He was on that fateful maiden voyage and survived while hundreds of less privileged people perished. ?That he didn’t do the noble thing and go down with the ship dogged him the rest of his life.
So I presume this is ?a story about his struggle to salvage his career and his reputation. IOW: it’s a redemption story.
As most people don’t remember him by name, I suggest the logine lead off with something to indicate that this is not a work of fiction, like “The true story of….” or “Inspired by…”
The logline also needs to more clearly indicate what his objective goal was and his m.o. for achieving it.
fwiw
See lessWhen a mission goes wrong a star ship crew are stranded in the distant future where artificial intelligence is consuming the galaxy. Lost in this chaotic realm the world weary captain and his inexperienced crew must form allegiances and negotiate deals with other species which will at times severely test their ethics and values.
Is this conceived to be a long form story (like a VOD series, a franchise) or a single feature film?
Is this conceived to be a long form story (like a VOD series, a franchise) or a single feature film?
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