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A desperately lonely woman is unknowingly trapped in purgatory until her grieving husband is finally able to let her go
Is the purgatory literal or figurative?
Is the purgatory literal or figurative?
See less250 Years into the future, the US and others have shied more and more from democracy. A Young Man working for NASA is chosen to be part of a team mission to explore a new planet found far away that could potentially be a new home for humans, away from corrupt governments and war. The discoveries he and his team make will change them forever.
As Richiev said. ? The logline sets up a situation for a plot, but it doesn't seems to have a plot.The plot of the story is not the discovery, but what they must do in response to the discovery. ?The discovery is an event that ''changes them forever" ?-- well, ?that's what an inciting incident?is suRead more
As Richiev said. ? The logline sets up a situation for a plot, but it doesn’t seems to have a plot.
The plot of the story is not the discovery, but what they must do in response to the discovery. ?The discovery is an event that ”changes them forever” ?– well, ?that’s what an inciting incident?is supposed to do!?
So whatever the discovery is, it is the game changer, and the logline shouldn’t hide it.
What is discovered and as a result what becomes the dramatic goal in response to the discovery? ?What jeopardy does the discovery create? ?And what are the stakes?
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See lessShort Film: An old black man living in a quiet retirement home finds a record player than, when used, makes the listener(s) young again..
It's an interesting premise, but as philasify said, the logline would benefit by the inclusion of a dramatic problem. ?Like it only makes listeners act young again while it plays. ?As soon as the music stops, so does the benefit; the senior citizens revert to feeling and acting their age.
It’s an interesting premise, but as philasify said, the logline would benefit by the inclusion of a dramatic problem. ?Like it only makes listeners act young again while it plays. ?As soon as the music stops, so does the benefit; the senior citizens revert to feeling and acting their age.
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