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  1. Posted: May 3, 2017In: Comedy

    Two sleazy disgraceful cops become unlikely heroes in their last-ditch effort to save their jobs and the damaged reputation of their department by vowing to take down a powerful drug and sex trafficking operation they?re steady customers of.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 3, 2017 at 7:00 am

    Say what? ?They're thinking of shutting down a police department?Fire miscreant officers -- yes. ?Reorganize the department -- yes.??But it's not logical nor credible that a city would abolish, would even think about abolishing, the entire department because of bad press created by a few officers. ?Read more

    Say what? ?They’re thinking of shutting down a police department?

    Fire miscreant officers — yes. ?Reorganize the department — yes.??But it’s not logical nor credible that a city would abolish, would even think about abolishing, the entire department because of bad press created by a few officers. ?Love it or hate it, ?a city must have a police department.

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  2. Posted: May 3, 2017In: Drama

    A bitter yet compliant African slave is killed for a crime he didn?t commit and is revived through black magic. Upon discovering he?s immortal, he?ll spend decades trying to recover what was stolen from him. New Logline: After a revived African slave discovers he is immortal after being framed for murder, he spends each passing century fighting bigotry to end how blacks are viewed in America. 5/3/2017

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    Added an answer on May 3, 2017 at 6:48 am

    Given that he's immortal, there's no urgency implied in his struggle, no ticking clock. ?If he doesn't succeed ?year or century he can always try, try, try again until he succeeds. What's to worry about? ?Time is on his side.Also there seems to be a disconnect between the inciting incident and his oRead more

    Given that he’s immortal, there’s no urgency implied in his struggle, no ticking clock. ?If he doesn’t succeed ?year or century he can always try, try, try again until he succeeds. What’s to worry about? ?Time is on his side.

    Also there seems to be a disconnect between the inciting incident and his objective goal. ?The logline says he was killed for a crime he didn’t commit. ?And then it says he’s trying to recover what was stolen from him. What was “stolen” from him that he wants to recover? ?There needs to be a common denominator between the inciting incident and the resulting action and I don’t see it what it is.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: May 3, 2017In: Horror

    Trapped in an isolated mansion by paranormal forces from the dark world of Irish mythology, an estate appraiser and her team face death as they struggle to unravel a gruesome, long-buried secret.

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    Added an answer on May 3, 2017 at 4:27 am

    As foxtrot25 said. ?Given the situation, what becomes the objective goal? ?And what is at stake? And who is the main character, the protagonist in the group?

    As foxtrot25 said. ?Given the situation, what becomes the objective goal? ?And what is at stake?

    And who is the main character, the protagonist in the group?

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