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  1. Posted: October 17, 2020In: Comedy

    A young latina with basic english and a desire to experience independece must keep her horrible job in a American Resort and generate extra income to keep her word to return the huge invesment of trip to her parents when the season is low.

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    Added an answer on October 20, 2020 at 11:33 am

    I think the premise has promise but it needs polishing and fleshing out.

    I think the premise has promise but it needs polishing and fleshing out.

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  2. Posted: October 17, 2020In: Comedy

    A mild mannered insurance salesman living in the universe where all action movies takes place gets tired of action heros always crashing everything and wants to make them answer for their latest transgression, without being drawn into the action himself.

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    Added an answer on October 20, 2020 at 11:31 am

    What's his motivation? What are the personal stakes for him? He's a *SALESMAN*. More accidents means more demand for coverage, more policies sold, more re-newals -- more premiums he can pocket. He's working in a salesman's heaven.

    What’s his motivation? What are the personal stakes for him? He’s a *SALESMAN*. More accidents means more demand for coverage, more policies sold, more re-newals — more premiums he can pocket.

    He’s working in a salesman’s heaven.

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  3. Posted: October 13, 2020In: Television

    At a less-than-prestigious medical school, five non-traditional students — the former starlet of a medical drama, a grizzled field medic, an ADHD-addled wunderkind, a single mother of twins, and an overachiever fallen from grace — fight to prove they’re worthy of a medical license, even if it’s at the end of a road less traveled.

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    Added an answer on October 20, 2020 at 11:19 am

    There's not enough space in a logline to list and sketch characters in an ensemble cast. That will have to wait for the pitch meeting. What producers want to see in a logline is a succinct statement (30 words or less) the franchise, the central conceit that will drive the story episode after episodeRead more

    There’s not enough space in a logline to list and sketch characters in an ensemble cast. That will have to wait for the pitch meeting. What producers want to see in a logline is a succinct statement (30 words or less) the franchise, the central conceit that will drive the story episode after episode, season after season.

    The franchise for this series seems to be: Five “fish out of water” struggle to become doctors.

    But will millions of viewers want to see characters who don’t have the right stuff to be accepted by a prestigious medical school? I dunno.

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