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  1. Posted: March 14, 2020In: Adventure

    When her baby sister is taken by a dark spirit, a Chippawa girl must go on a journey to find Asibikaashi, spider women to help save her sister.

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    Added an answer on March 15, 2020 at 8:19 am

    I'm guessing that the logline would make perfect sense to anyone familiar with Chippewa mythology.? But 99%+ of the people in the movie industry who could green light the project aren't Chippewa, aren't familiar with the mythology.? So, alas,? it is highly unlikely that it will make sense to them eiRead more

    I’m guessing that the logline would make perfect sense to anyone familiar with Chippewa mythology.? But 99%+ of the people in the movie industry who could green light the project aren’t Chippewa, aren’t familiar with the mythology.? So, alas,? it is highly unlikely that it will make sense to them either.? The story needs to be translated into terms that would make sense to? a non-Chippewa.

    I have no idea why the girl’s only option, or best option, is to find a spider goddess (“women goddess” is redundant”) and why that isn’t enough. Why the spider goddess must in turn retrieve a magical dream catcher (what/who is that?)? Nor why, for that matter, did a? “dark spirit”? (what’s that?) kidnap her younger sister.? For what purpose?? Why didn’t the dark spirit kidnap the girl?

    Just saying.

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  2. Posted: September 30, 2019In: Comedy, Examples

    With 11 days left until the election, a political spin-doctor recruits a Hollywood producer to stage a phony war in order to distract voters from a presidential sex scandal.

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    Added an answer on March 15, 2020 at 6:38 am

    The spin doctor is the protagonist. This is a logline for a movie that actually got made.? Getting re-elected POTUS isn't high enough stakes?? The current occupant of? the White House and his opponents think otherwise.

    The spin doctor is the protagonist.

    This is a logline for a movie that actually got made.? Getting re-elected POTUS isn’t high enough stakes?? The current occupant of? the White House and his opponents think otherwise.

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2020In: Examples, SciFi

    In a future where winners are conceived using genetic engineering, a born loser buys the identity of a winner on the black market so he can fulfill his lifelong dream of space travel.

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    Added an answer on March 14, 2020 at 12:15 pm

    Nir Shelter;Good question.? There's a ticking clock.? He has genetic defects (because his parents couldn't afford a genetically engineered fix);, he's been given a prognosis of only 30 years to live. He has to act NOW, do whatever it takes.

    Nir Shelter;

    Good question.? There’s a ticking clock.? He has genetic defects (because his parents couldn’t afford a genetically engineered fix);, he’s been given a prognosis of only 30 years to live. He has to act NOW, do whatever it takes.

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