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Her Ranger squad K.I.A , team leader and lone survivor Jo Rose is dishonourably discharged. Now a cash-strapped hitwoman, with a sister fallen to cancer, Jo must navigate the vicious world of professional hits and custody of her sisters kids, while surviving merciless Rangers that seek revenge.
I think you have all the ingredients for an interesting movie ?-- but now you need a recipe that mixes them together in the right measures. You need a plot. A inciting incident that triggers the character to pursue a specific objective goal with high stakes despite deadly opposition. For my money, IRead more
I think you have all the ingredients for an interesting movie ?– but now you need a recipe that mixes them together in the right measures.
You need a plot.
A inciting incident that triggers the character to pursue a specific objective goal with high stakes despite deadly opposition.
For my money, I would be interested in an origin story of a female assassin. ?How she came to be dishonorably discharged and forced to make a living , a career, out of using the only skills she had: to kill. ?How she comes to live a dual life as a Dr.Jekyll-Miss Hyde, a cold-blooded hit woman and a nurturing step-mom.
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See lessWhen her male colleagues wager on her best friend’s chastity, a woman remains silent; when the bet ends in rape, she seeks redemption through vengeance.
I can understand the need for redemption for failing to warn her friend, but I would like a clarification on the nature of the bet.Were the sexist pigs wagering on whether her friend was a virgin or who could deflower her?And how does she intend to take revenge? ?By legals means or...?
I can understand the need for redemption for failing to warn her friend, but I would like a clarification on the nature of the bet.
Were the sexist pigs wagering on whether her friend was a virgin or who could deflower her?
And how does she intend to take revenge? ?By legals means or…?
See lessA young police officer must prevent a bomb exploding aboard a city bus by keeping its speed above 50 mph.
I think this is an instance where less is more.In only 21 words, mohmoudmokhliss distills the plot down to the hook, the most important element in the logline.However, I think whether the protagonist is young (or cocky )is?not as important as the stakes, that the lives of passengers are in jeopardy.Read more
I think this is an instance where less is more.
In only 21 words, mohmoudmokhliss distills the plot down to the hook, the most important element in the logline.
However, I think whether the protagonist is young (or cocky )is?not as important as the stakes, that the lives of passengers are in jeopardy.
So:
A cop must keep a transit bus full of passengers speeding above 50 mph to prevent a bomb from exploding.
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