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  1. Posted: March 4, 2017In: Drama

    A rapier wielding Latina vigilante disrupts the plans of a drug and human trafficking gang that uses fake ICE vehicles and gear to kidnap undocumented Latinas.

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    Added an answer on March 6, 2017 at 1:39 pm

    Dkpough1:Luke Skywalker was shown learning how to use the Force. ?Over the course of 2 movies. ?Now why did George Lucas do that?

    Dkpough1:

    Luke Skywalker was shown learning how to use the Force. ?Over the course of 2 movies. ?Now why did George Lucas do that?

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  2. Posted: March 5, 2017In: Fantasy

    A middle aged couple take their niece on a haunted ghost tour in hopes of reconnecting, only to sense the tour guide may not be a guide at all but a ghost.

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    Added an answer on March 5, 2017 at 3:20 am

    The logline sets up a situation for a plot, but it doesn't fully deliver a plot. ?The plot begins where the logline ends: ?that is, what happens after it becomes apparent the guide is a ghost? ?What dramatic question does that raise? ?As a result what becomes the couple's objective goal? (I'm presumRead more

    The logline sets up a situation for a plot, but it doesn’t fully deliver a plot. ?The plot begins where the logline ends: ?that is, what happens after it becomes apparent the guide is a ghost? ?What dramatic question does that raise? ?As a result what becomes the couple’s objective goal?

    (I’m presuming the couple are the co-protagonists. ?If the protagonist is the niece, then the logline needs to be framed to give her the “starring role”.)

    And “reconnecting” to what? ?Rebuilding their relationship? ?Connecting to the niece? Or…?

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: March 4, 2017In: Drama

    A rapier wielding Latina vigilante disrupts the plans of a drug and human trafficking gang that uses fake ICE vehicles and gear to kidnap undocumented Latinas.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 5, 2017 at 2:48 am

    Dkpough1:>>>That?s what hooked you, not watching an hour or more of her learning to use a weapon and then spending thirty minutes taking on the bad guys.Uh, no. ?What hooked me is the character (a rapier wielding Latina) ?in her context (not only the plight of undocumented immigrants but alRead more

    Dkpough1:

    >>>That?s what hooked you, not watching an hour or more of her learning to use a weapon and then spending thirty minutes taking on the bad guys.

    Uh, no. ?

    What hooked me is the character (a rapier wielding Latina) ?in her context (not only the plight of undocumented immigrants but also a a female heroine in a machismo culture) . IMHO, that context remains woefully unexplored in mainstream American cinema.

    >>>The movie ?Taken?, when it was released, had no origin story for Bryan Mills
    Didn’t need one. He was ?(obviously) a ?middle-aged hombre. ?All that the audience needed to know was that he was a retired CIA officer. The audience could fill in the blanks, believe he had the skills and experience to rescue his daughter and kill her abductors.

    A better comparison ?for this concept might be the 1st episode of the “Hunger Games” trilogy.

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