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Following the discovery of an enemy radar station?s location, a pilot?s brash behavior threatens his chance to destroy it and earn the respect he craves.
What time period is the the story? ?World War II or...? Why would saving his life and that of his crew be a less important stake than winning their respect? ? Seems to me he has a deeper character flaw than being "brash".
What time period is the the story? ?World War II or…?
Why would saving his life and that of his crew be a less important stake than winning their respect? ? Seems to me he has a deeper character flaw than being “brash”.
See lessA high school outcast in the shadow of his best friend falls in love with his best friend?s lover.
The logline sets up an interesting situation, one a lot of young people (the multitude of outsiders, wannabes) can identify with. ?And a major obstacle is clear enough to me: ?his best friend. ?He will have to risk losing his best, maybe only, friend in order to win her affection.What is lacking toRead more
The logline sets up an interesting situation, one a lot of young people (the multitude of outsiders, wannabes) can identify with. ?And a major obstacle is clear enough to me: ?his best friend. ?He will have to risk losing his best, maybe only, friend in order to win her affection.
What is lacking to complete the logline is an objective goal, a clearly stated game plan to win her affection. ?The logline sets up the 1st Act., but not the 2nd Act. ?What is the through line for the 2nd Act? ?What is his game plan?
I give the concept a thumbs up — but it needs work.
See lessAfter forgetting to bring Vegemite a group of tourists in the Australian bush land are set upon by carnivorous drop bears and must find a way to survive.
I can see this as a comedy sketch, a short film. ?But as a full length feature film?Have you been able to plot enough twist and turns to flesh out a feature length film? ?Or is it only intended as a short?
I can see this as a comedy sketch, a short film. ?But as a full length feature film?
Have you been able to plot enough twist and turns to flesh out a feature length film? ?Or is it only intended as a short?
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