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  1. Posted: February 1, 2017In: Horror

    The perfect test subject wakes in the middle of a murder and must journey into a nightmare to find out why she?s killing.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 1, 2017 at 9:19 am

    Perfect test subject for what?

    Perfect test subject for what?

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  2. Posted: January 31, 2017In: SciFi

    When he skips his migraine medication, a long term sufferer starts perceiving reality differently from others and must use different perceptive to find out which reality is real: His or the Rest of the World’s.

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    Added an answer on February 1, 2017 at 9:11 am

    Might work better if the inciting incident entails his skipping his meds for schizophrenia.And it might work better to frame the theme of reality perception around a specific dramatic problem. ?Like did he really witness a murder (or commit one) while he skipped his meds -- or did he hallucinate it?Read more

    Might work better if the inciting incident entails his skipping his meds for schizophrenia.

    And it might work better to frame the theme of reality perception around a specific dramatic problem. ?Like did he really witness a murder (or commit one) while he skipped his meds — or did he hallucinate it?

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: February 1, 2017In: SciFi

    ?When a man realizes the creatures, he?s been convinced his whole life weren?t real, are actually trying to take over the world, will he turn against what end up being his own kind, or save his new love, and the rest of the human race?? ? UNKNOWN POWER by Judah Ray ?

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    Added an answer on February 1, 2017 at 9:06 am

    This defeats the whole purpose of a logline because it's all tease, no tell. It doesn't tell what the inciting incident is. It doesn't tell what the objective goal of the main character is. It doesn't tell what's at stake, why it makes any difference whether anyone believes the main character or notRead more

    This defeats the whole purpose of a logline because it’s all tease, no tell.

    It doesn’t tell what the inciting incident is.
    It doesn’t tell what the objective goal of the main character is.
    It doesn’t tell what’s at stake, why it makes any difference whether anyone believes the main character or not.

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