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A movie star plagued by scandal quits his Hollywood life and moves to Australia to find a new purpose.
Find a new purpose? So his objective goal is....to find an objective goal?? The logline needs a statement of a specific objective goal that motivates him and defines the plot for the rest of the film.
Find a new purpose? So his objective goal is….to find an objective goal?
? The logline needs a statement of a specific objective goal that motivates him and defines the plot for the rest of the film.
See lessRENEWED – While riding the bus, an introvert girl falls in love with the fantasy of a boy she sees, he introduces her to the vast landscape of people living in her mind, all fighting to control her.
Twenty nine words are expended setting up some kind of inciting incident -- but not ?a word as to what she must do about it, what becomes her objective goal as a result of this revelation. The logline needs to compress the inciting incident and include a statement of an objective goal.
Twenty nine words are expended setting up some kind of inciting incident — but not ?a word as to what she must do about it, what becomes her objective goal as a result of this revelation.
The logline needs to compress the inciting incident and include a statement of an objective goal.
See less?A lone recruit with a conflicted past, marked by the return to his dark, twisted family now living in a divided State, chasing their one-way ticket to social class freedom. ?
What is the inciting incident? As a consequence of the inciting incident, what is the recruit's objective goal? Who or what stands in the way or threatens to defeat his purpose? What's at stake?
What is the inciting incident?
See lessAs a consequence of the inciting incident, what is the recruit’s objective goal?
Who or what stands in the way or threatens to defeat his purpose?
What’s at stake?