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  1. Posted: January 23, 2017In: Comedy

    After lying about being pregnant in order to spite her philandering partner, an antisocial young punk must face up to her responsibilities as she begins to realise the lengths to which he is willing to go in order to change his ways and face up to his.

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    Added an answer on January 24, 2017 at 3:26 am

    What does " responsibilities" mean? ? ?What is her objective goal? (And her ruse will only work for a few months ?--then what?)

    What does ” responsibilities” mean? ? ?What is her objective goal?

    (And her ruse will only work for a few months ?–then what?)

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  2. Posted: January 23, 2017In: Examples

    An overambitious, scholarship student finds his place when he begins an unusual friendship with a depressed steel magnate. However, when both men fall a lonely primary school teacher, they must decide which relationship is more important.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 24, 2017 at 3:22 am

    The logline seems to cast the woman in the tired so-last-century trope of the compliant, passive love object. ?Doesn't she have a vote in terms of defining her own love life? ?Isn't she entitled to be the agent of her own destiny, to decide by herself for herself which relationship is more importantRead more


    The logline seems to cast the woman in the tired so-last-century trope of the compliant, passive love object. ?Doesn’t she have a vote in terms of defining her own love life? ?Isn’t she entitled to be the agent of her own destiny, to decide by herself for herself which relationship is more important? ?Or none at all: why would she want to get involved with either of them?

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: January 23, 2017In: Drama

    An isolated young man, obsessed with the ’60s, accidentally invokes the ghost of a precocious young girl who was killed in the ’60s. As they work together to uncover the secret of her unsolved murder, the ghost’s awe at the modern world begins to show him that he’s living in the past.

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    Added an answer on January 24, 2017 at 3:15 am

    .He may be obsessed with the 60's but I fail to see how ?he would become obsessed with solving the murder. ?What's his personal motivation? Why MUST he solve now in the present tense of his own life, a murder that occurred in the 60's, probably (I assume) before he was born? ?What's at stake for himRead more

    .He may be obsessed with the 60’s but I fail to see how ?he would become obsessed with solving the murder. ?What’s his personal motivation? Why MUST he solve now in the present tense of his own life, a murder that occurred in the 60’s, probably (I assume) before he was born? ?What’s at stake for him in his own life?

    Also:??”the ghost?s awe at the modern world begins to show him that he?s living in the past” relates to a subjective issue and is something of a spoiler. ?Loglines are about objective?goals, not subjective issues. ?As a general rule, a loglines should not deal (explicitly) with the resolution of subjective issues and it should never give away a 2nd or 3rd Act Big Discovery or Big Reveal/Reversal relating to a subjective issue.

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