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  1. Posted: November 21, 2016In: Family

    During the second year of a dictator?s reign in the Philippines where every Filipino wants him dead, he was murdered. The suspect: his 10-year-old son.

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    Added an answer on November 21, 2016 at 11:38 pm

    If the story is told from the pov of the10-year son, the main character, then frame the logline from his pov.>>the royal family In the?Philippines??

    If the story is told from the pov of the10-year son, the main character, then frame the logline from his pov.

    >>the royal family
    In the?Philippines??

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  2. Posted: November 19, 2016In: Drama

    In order to graduate film school, a self-centered student documents his terminally ill father’s attempt to recapture the heart of a former lover, prior to her impending marriage.

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    Added an answer on November 21, 2016 at 1:48 pm

    Why would the inciting incident by his kid graduating? ?Wouldn't it be the diagnosis of cancer? ?That diagnosis -- not the graduation-- suddenly makes it urgent for him to ?track down his ex-flame. ?He can't wait --he must act. ?Carpe diem.

    Why would the inciting incident by his kid graduating? ?Wouldn’t it be the diagnosis of cancer? ?That diagnosis — not the graduation– suddenly makes it urgent for him to ?track down his ex-flame. ?He can’t wait –he must act. ?Carpe diem.

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  3. Posted: November 20, 2016In: Drama

    A middle-aged writer who fears his dreams of fame may never come notices obscure fabrications in the nonfiction works of a famous author (think Malcolm Gladwell in stature) and publishes a series of scathing corrections, which attract increasing attention and lead him to commit his own questionable acts in pursuit of fame.

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    Added an answer on November 21, 2016 at 8:08 am

    At 57 words the logline is too long and lays out too much information, almost the ?entire story arc, which is unnecessary. ?All that's needed are a few basic elements. ?These elements are discussed under "Training" at the top of the web page.And is he merely struggling, or is a more congruent characRead more

    At 57 words the logline is too long and lays out too much information, almost the ?entire story arc, which is unnecessary. ?All that’s needed are a few basic elements. ?These elements are discussed under “Training” at the top of the web page.

    And is he merely struggling, or is a more congruent character trait ?in relation to the story arc that he’s ambitious which leads him to overreach? ?IOW: what is his character flaw that leads to his downfall?

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