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After a deadly contagion takes his wife & daughter, a special forces operative must infiltrate the very military base he was once stationed to find the cure & exact his revenge.
What do you conceive to be ?the inciting incident? ?What he witnesses? ?Or the outbreak of the epidemic?
What do you conceive to be ?the inciting incident? ?What he witnesses? ?Or the outbreak of the epidemic?
See lessWhen a man discovers his girlfriend?s heinous secret, he?s forced to turn her in before she strikes again. He creates an elaborate scheme centered around a romantic dinner, but realizes that she?s always a step ahead of him.
What do you conceive to be the hook of your story? And what is the inciting incident that kicks off the plot-- becoming the prime suspect or the kidnapping of his niece?
What do you conceive to be the hook of your story?
And what is the inciting incident that kicks off the plot– becoming the prime suspect or the kidnapping of his niece?
See lessIn 2050 L.A., a detective accused of murder must clear her name by catching the real suspect: a famous actress cloned from her DNA. MINORITY REPORT meets ORPHAN BLACK.
What's the hook of your story? Hollyweird glitter? ?Or cloning? ?I opt for the latter. ??I think your concept is strong enough to not need some pixie dust, some Hollyweird glitter. ?But if you insist, make the detective the prime suspect in the murder of a Hollyweird celebrity. ?Now you've got yourRead more
What’s the hook of your story? Hollyweird glitter? ?Or cloning? ?I opt for the latter. ??
I think your concept is strong enough to not need some pixie dust, some Hollyweird glitter. ?But if you insist, make the detective the prime suspect in the murder of a Hollyweird celebrity. ?Now you’ve got your glitter. And after all, shouldn’t she be accused of killing someone significant? ?(And you can still keep the actress clone as a suspect because she has a motive: eliminating a competitor, or she’s a jealous jilted lover. Whatever Hollyweird folks feud about.)
I see you posted an almost identical logline for this story in March. ?I presume you’ve made a lot of headway with script since then. ?Best wishes for your writing.
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