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After a special forces operative witnesses experiments on soldiers & prisoners, he abandons a promising military career & returns to the quiet life. But when a deadly outbreak reeks of government conspiracy & threatens his family, he jumps into the fight to expose the culprits & track down the cure.
What do you conceive as the hook of the story?What makes this different from, makes it stand out from all the other films already made about plagues and epidemics?Why must the protagonist be an investment banker? ?What's so dramatically special about his profession in relation to the epidemic? ?HowRead more
What do you conceive as the hook of the story?
What makes this different from, makes it stand out from all the other films already made about plagues and epidemics?
Why must the protagonist be an investment banker? ?What’s so dramatically special about his profession in relation to the epidemic? ?How does being an investment banker make him a sympathetic character? He’s in the over-privileged 1% with money and access to resources to better his odds than the other 99%. ?So why should the audience (most of whom are in the other 99%) care about him?
How does”attempts at redemption” translate into a concrete objective goal? ?What specifically must he do? His efforts may be “fruitless” but what exactly he is struggling to do, what’s his game plan to survive? ?And does it include saving others?
Take as an example “Schindler’s List”: ?the protagonist’s redemptive act for exploiting Jewish labor during World War 2 translates into the specific, concrete objective goal of saving as many Jews as he can from the ghetto and Auschwitz. ?He risks all, spends every pfennig he has to save others.
See lessIn wartime, a farm girl and her sister join a new women?s baseball league but when they are put on different teams, sibling rivalries are played out in a game for the championship.
During World War 2, when two sisters join the first female professional baseball league, they?must struggle to make it succeed despite their sibling rivalry. (25 words) A League of Their Own But isn't the hook of the story the historical novelty of a professional female baseball league? ?Should a loRead more
During World War 2, when two sisters join the first female professional baseball league, they?must struggle to make it succeed despite their sibling rivalry.
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A League of Their Own
But isn’t the hook of the story the historical novelty of a professional female baseball league? ?Should a logline be built around that hook? ?Is the sibling rivalry a secondary plot, a framing device to play out a particular subjective problem, the sibling rivalry, as well as be (fairly) true to what really happened?
Fwiw. I’m not sure and I haven’t see the movie in a long time. ?Maybe time to re-view it.
See lessWhen her pack is stolen, a spirited Corinthian girl must reclaim it from thieves and the important letter within which she promised to deliver to Rome. (Possible script title: ‘Phoebe’)
I suggest naming the villain responsible for the persecution, Rome's greatest fiddler. So:When the Apostle Paul?s epistle to the Romans is stolen from her travel pack, a spirited Corinthian girl must get it back to inspire Christians being persecuted by the Emperor Nero. (31 words)
I suggest naming the villain responsible for the persecution, Rome’s greatest fiddler. So:
When the Apostle Paul?s epistle to the Romans is stolen from her travel pack, a spirited Corinthian girl must get it back to inspire Christians being persecuted by the Emperor Nero.
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