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  1. Posted: October 13, 2016In: Action

    Female Security Guards coerced into helping commit a massive terrorist attack are torn between protecting their loved ones and National Security.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 13, 2016 at 11:21 am

    Don't you think it might be difficult to evoke audience admiration or empathy for 3 women who believed the terrorists weren't telling a bad joke and didn't have the wits or moral integrity to report them?Whatever, that still leaves 1 woman to qualify as the designated protagonist around whom an audiRead more

    Don’t you think it might be difficult to evoke audience admiration or empathy for 3 women who believed the terrorists weren’t telling a bad joke and didn’t have the wits or moral integrity to report them?

    Whatever, that still leaves 1 woman to qualify as the designated protagonist around whom an audience might rally and root for.

    Are the terrorists holding their loved ones hostage? ?IOW: how are the security guards exercising emotional extortion over them?

    ?Whatever, I am still unclear how the scales of the predicament are evenly balanced. ?How their dramatic choice constitutes a true dilemma. (To be a true dilemma, the scales must be evenly balanced.)

    The moral predicament presented to the women seems to be: ?let tens of thousands of strangers die or a few , their precious loved ones. ?How equal are those choices?

    The emotional agony of being confronted by such horrific choices would be excruciating, of course. But how likely is it that their feelings will exonerate them in the audience’s mind ?for choosing the greater of 2 evils, for opting to cooperate in order to save their precious few, the lives of thousands of others be damned? ?How likely is it that an audience would accept anything less than that despite their feelings, they do the right thing; ?they do what heroes are supposed to do and opt ?for the lesser of 2 evils, for the greater good and refuse to cooperate?

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  2. Posted: October 13, 2016In: Action

    Female Security Guards coerced into helping commit a massive terrorist attack are torn between protecting their loved ones and National Security.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 13, 2016 at 9:56 am

    I have a couple of questions about the credibility of the whole premise.1] Why do the terrorists need the security guards to execute their dastardly deed? ?Why can't they just do it themselves?2] Why would the security guards believe that the terrorists would spare the lives of their loved ones? TheRead more

    I have a couple of questions about the credibility of the whole premise.

    1] Why do the terrorists need the security guards to execute their dastardly deed? ?Why can’t they just do it themselves?

    2] Why would the security guards believe that the terrorists would spare the lives of their loved ones? The terrorists obviously have no compunction about killing untold numbers of other innocent people. ? How is it possible for the guards to believe the lives of those they love will be spared by these ruthless, heartless fanatics if they play along?

    I can comprehend the dilemma the plot tries to place the security guards in, but right now it ?seems more contrived than credible.

    Just saying.

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  3. Posted: October 13, 2016In: Drama

    A high school senior in love with his best friend seeks to redeem himself to her and his friends after neglecting them in the depression of losing them when they all go their separate ways.

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    Added an answer on October 13, 2016 at 8:25 am

    What does "redeem himself" mean, exactly? ?How does that translate into a specific objective goal?What is the specific inciting incident that triggers his pursuit of that objective goal?Who is the antagonist/rival or obstacle that stands in his way that he must overcome to achieve his objective goalRead more

    What does “redeem himself” mean, exactly? ?How does that translate into a specific objective goal?

    What is the specific inciting incident that triggers his pursuit of that objective goal?

    Who is the antagonist/rival or obstacle that stands in his way that he must overcome to achieve his objective goal?

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