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After his son is mutilated by a legendary creature, a father must stop future deaths from happening only to learn that he has become the supernatural animan’s next target.
What's the hook? ?Well, It seems to be a monster, a "legendary creature". ?The problem with that description is that it is too general to evoke a visual, to give us any sense of what the monster looks like or the nature of its threat.If the threat was from a shark, a werewolf, a zombie, a vampire, aRead more
What’s the hook? ?Well, It seems to be a monster, a “legendary creature”. ?The problem with that description is that it is too general to evoke a visual, to give us any sense of what the monster looks like or the nature of its threat.
If the threat was from a shark, a werewolf, a zombie, a vampire, a dragon — these are monsters we are familiar with,, that we can imagine what they might look like, their defining characteristic that makes them so horrific — and interesting. ?But “legendary creature” gives us nothing to work with in terms of imagining what it might look like or its characteristic behavior that would be of dramatic interest.
The monster “mutiliated” his son. ?Again, a generality. ?Not enough detail for us to get an idea, a handle on the nature of the threat. ?What’s the visual on “mutilated”? ?Did he bite off his hand, gouge out his eye, scar him with acid-blood?
See lessAfter his brother’s aircraft carrier is destroyed by a mysterious dirigible in the closing days of WW2, a conceited fighter-pilot leads a squadron of misfits to intercept the craft before it reaches its next target: London.
A dirigible in World War II? ? In the closing days when by that time the Allies had complete mastery of the air space on the Western front? ?How historically credible is that?Is this is a hybrid action-fantasy that requires the audience to suspend disbelief that it could have actually happened? ?OrRead more
A dirigible in World War II? ? In the closing days when by that time the Allies had complete mastery of the air space on the Western front? ?How historically credible is that?
Is this is a hybrid action-fantasy that requires the audience to suspend disbelief that it could have actually happened? ?Or an action movie that can pass with the appearance of historical similitude ?– ?it could have happened?
See lessWhen an emotionally detached woman returns home after a decade of uncontrollable jumps into parallel universes, she must reconnect with her estranged father to create a cure before vanishing once again.
>>>a decade of uncontrollable jumps into parallel universesI find that a very interesting dramatic framework. ?But to what purpose? ? The movie adaptation of ?"Slaughterhouse Five" comes to mind where the hapless protagonist jumps uncontrollably back and forth in time. ?Which Kurt VonnegutRead more
>>>a decade of uncontrollable jumps into parallel universes
I find that a very interesting dramatic framework. ?But to what purpose? ? The movie adaptation of ?”Slaughterhouse Five” comes to mind where the hapless protagonist jumps uncontrollably back and forth in time. ?Which Kurt Vonnegut used to dramatize his absurd and senseless experiences as a POW during World War II.
What’s your purpose? ?What’s the itch you need to scratch with this concept?
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