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A single mother wakes up one morning having forgotten the past 16 years and the circumstances of her husband’s disappearance. While she tries to find him, a vengeful cop implicates her for a murder.
?I'm well aware of amnesia induced by physical trauma, but for someone to wake up one morning and for no apparent reason forget a specific interval of her life, 16 and only 16 years - well, can that actually happen? ?It would certainly be a rare event, but is it a medically plausible one?Modern audiRead more
?I’m well aware of amnesia induced by physical trauma, but for someone to wake up one morning and for no apparent reason forget a specific interval of her life, 16 and only 16 years – well, can that actually happen? ?It would certainly be a rare event, but is it a medically plausible one?
Modern audiences — and movie critics — are more sophisticated about these matters ?or can be become so by merely googling. ?So the initial amnesia has got to hold up under scrutiny as medically plausible. ?Just saying.
See lessWhen her drug-making father skips bond, an impoverished 17-year-old Ozark girl must find him or lose the family house, her younger siblings, and mentally-ill mother.
My take which includes the element of the ticking clock adding urgency to the desperation:When her meth-making father skips bail, a dirt poor Ozark teenager has one week to find him?or lose her family's only asset, their land. (25 words)A great movie, authentic characters, and a break-out performancRead more
My take which includes the element of the ticking clock adding urgency to the desperation:
When her meth-making father skips bail, a dirt poor Ozark teenager has one week to find him?or lose her family’s only asset, their land.
(25 words)
A great movie, authentic characters, and a break-out performance by Jennifer Lawrence.
See lessWhen an emotionally detached woman returns home after a decade of uncontrollable jumps into parallel universes, she must reconnect with her estranged father to create a cure before vanishing once again.
Knightrider: >>who wakes up in a new parallel universe every time she falls asleep Okay, that works for me. But I'm still mystified by the rest of the revised logline on other plot elements. ? "Control her abilities" would seems to be a means to a end, not and end of itself. ?It's a way of attRead more
Knightrider:
>>who wakes up in a new parallel universe every time she falls asleep
Okay, that works for me.
But I’m still mystified by the rest of the revised logline on other plot elements. ? “Control her abilities” would seems to be a means to a end, not and end of itself. ?It’s a way of attaining an objective goal. ?What is that goal? ??And who or what opposes or threatens her? ?What are the stakes? ?What are the consequences if she fails to do whatever she has to do.
The hook for me in your story is the fact that I “wake up” every time I fall asleep in an alternative world of vivid dreams. ?I have even developed some control of them — lucid dreaming. ?But I don’t what the idea is you wish to explore in this story, the itch is you’re trying to scratch.
Still, I’m intrigued.
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