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A struggling rock band must fight through petty rivalries, a dickhead manager and the zombie apocalypse, saving their band and the world on their way to the top.
What Moses99 said.?The logline needs a unifying framework in terms of a singular objective goal.
What Moses99 said.?The logline needs a unifying framework in terms of a singular objective goal.
See lessFormerly a gang member, when a gunfight paralyzes an aspiring cook’s hands, she resorts to preparing scalding-hot entrees with her feet to accomplish her dream of becoming a gourmet chef.
Hmm. ?How ?plausible is it to be paralyzed in one's hands after an injury -- but not the feet? Have you studied up on the levels of paralysis as a result of spinal cord injuries (C1-C8, T1-T12, S1-S5)? Is this paralysis premise really medically possible?
Hmm. ?How ?plausible is it to be paralyzed in one’s hands after an injury — but not the feet? Have you studied up on the levels of paralysis as a result of spinal cord injuries (C1-C8, T1-T12, S1-S5)? Is this paralysis premise really medically possible?
See lessOn a deserted hot planetoid, a lonely robotic puppy tries to befriend an android visitor. His attempts at friendship are rebuffed until he is put a life and death choice. When the pup gives up his very own battery, his last hope comes from a within mysterious spherical chamber.
On a deserted hot planetoid, a lonely robotic puppy tries to befriend an android visitor.For the purpose of a logline that's the core of the plot.>>His attempts at friendship are rebuffed until he is put a life and death choice.Second act complications, part of the script of course, but extranRead more
On a deserted hot planetoid, a lonely robotic puppy tries to befriend an android visitor.
For the purpose of a logline that’s the core of the plot.
>>His attempts at friendship are rebuffed until he is put a life and death choice.
Second act complications, part of the script of course, but extraneous to the purpose of a logline.
>>When the pup gives up his very own battery,
A critical second act, midpoint or thereafter, moment. ?But a logline should not reveal, hint or suggest that moment.
>>his last hope comes from a within mysterious spherical chamber.
This appears to be tipping the hand as to the ?3rd act resolution. ?A logline should ?never reveal, hint or suggest what the 3rd act resolution may be.
fwiw
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