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After she’s betrayed doing a one time mission for the government, a broke data smuggler must decode the data packet encrypted in her brain to use as a bargaining chip for her life.
As CraigDGriffiths said. ?What is the want? ?Why has she undertaken such a dangerous and unusual assignment? ? What's in it ?for her?And in the current version, the story seems to turn on actions of the smuggler, not the transporter. ?Working out the solution to the dramatic problem is the protagoniRead more
As CraigDGriffiths said. ?What is the want? ?Why has she undertaken such a dangerous and unusual assignment? ? What’s in it ?for her?
And in the current version, the story seems to turn on actions of the smuggler, not the transporter. ?Working out the solution to the dramatic problem is the protagonist’s job.. ?Which would seem to make the smuggler the protagonist, not the transporter.
See lessAn art thief must survive an auction where a masked killer hunts the bidders for their secret sins.
And why would a movie audience be rooting for the art thief to survive? ?Seems like he has it coming to him. And if the killer is masked, wouldn't he immediately stand out in the crowd of bidders, raise an alarm? ?Shouldn't he be skulking around unobtrusively, nothing special to draw attention to hiRead more
And why would a movie audience be rooting for the art thief to survive? ?Seems like he has it coming to him.
And if the killer is masked, wouldn’t he immediately stand out in the crowd of bidders, raise an alarm? ?Shouldn’t he be skulking around unobtrusively, nothing special to draw attention to him or raise alarm?
See lessWhen her mad-scientist sister finds a way to channel through to her autistic son’s mind, a desperate mother finds out it eventually let a door open to another realm.
As Dkpough1 said the logline describes a situation for a possible plot, but not a plot. ?As a result of her sister being able to access her autistic son's mind, what becomes her objective goal? ?What does she want to do about it? And does her sister have to be a "mad scientist"? ?What's the point? ?Read more
As Dkpough1 said the logline describes a situation for a possible plot, but not a plot. ?As a result of her sister being able to access her autistic son’s mind, what becomes her objective goal? ?What does she want to do about it?
And does her sister have to be a “mad scientist”? ?What’s the point? ?Why can’t the sister be a normal person who discovers she has an extraordinary ability?
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