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  1. Posted: July 24, 2016In: Examples

    After a street-wise prostitute agrees to provide a cold-hearted businessman with a week of ‘professional’ companionship, she must struggle to prevent their business relationship from turning into love.

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    Added an answer on July 24, 2016 at 2:45 pm

    Nir Shelter,Thanks for your input. ?I have a different pov, frankly a love-hate relationship with the movie.On the one hand, I hate the movie because it is a sexist portrayal that perpetuates the fantasy near and dear to men's hearts (and other organs) of the whore with the heart of gold. ?I know beRead more

    Nir Shelter,

    Thanks for your input. ?I have a different pov, frankly a love-hate relationship with the movie.

    On the one hand, I hate the movie because it is a sexist portrayal that perpetuates the fantasy near and dear to men’s hearts (and other organs) of the whore with the heart of gold. ?I know better having worked for the LAPD.

    ?In Hollywood.

    Periodically the department does vice sweeps, vacuuming up prostitutes and johns. ?In the summer time, as many as a 100 a night. ?And not one of the women was anywhere near as classy, good looking and socially adept and psychologically sensible as the Julia Roberts character. Not one of the 100’s that I saw.??Street prostitutes are wretched women, damaged goods, the dregs of the sex trade.

    On the other hand, I love the movie because it’s a cleverly crafted story. Especially given the fact that the original script was a grim drama, not a romance, with a downer ending: the prostitute is an addict who doesn’t win the businessman’s heart, overdoses and dies at the end.

    But when Buena Vista — aka: Disney — picked up the option, they waved their magic wand and turned the pumpkin into a beautiful carriage, rats?into horses ?– they transformed it into a Cinderella story.?

    Anyway, this is my Exhibit “A” for a logline where it seems the relationship should get the spotlight, not whatever else either character is striving for. ?Where, in practical terms of promoting the script, ?the “B” story subs for the “A” story. ?The hook is ?their relationship, not their objective goals.

    “A businessman falls in love with a prostitute whom he has hired for a week to be his escort” — that’s the elevator pitch.

    Despite my “feminist fury” I know I’m howling in the wind. ?The fantasy of the prostitute with the heart of gold seems to be primal in the male psyche, perhaps archetypal. ?As long as it sells tickets, ?the fantasy will continue to be perpetuated in cinema.

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  2. Posted: July 23, 2016In: Examples

    When her family railroad falls apart, a driven woman fights against her incompetent brother, increasing regulation and mysteriously disappearing businessmen, to save her family business. -Atlas Shrugged-

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    Added an answer on July 24, 2016 at 2:06 pm

    It's a complicated, sprawling narrative. ?The book is almost 1,200 pages long. ?(I tried to read it once, but decided that the book was too long and life was too short.) The 3-part movie adaptation fills 5 hours of screen time; I don't think it's possible to get more specific in the logline -- not iRead more

    It’s a complicated, sprawling narrative. ?The book is almost 1,200 pages long. ?(I tried to read it once, but decided that the book was too long and life was too short.)

    The 3-part movie adaptation fills 5 hours of screen time; I don’t think it’s possible to get more specific in the logline — not in less than 40 words. ?Heck, not in less than a 100 words.

    The story sells itself (or not, depending on one’s ?pov) on the basis of the reputation of its author, Ayn Rand. ?The movie was financed and produced by zealots of her philosophy.

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  3. Posted: July 21, 2016In: Drama

    After his pregnant wife’s cancer medication gets pulled from the public health system, a hot-headed Aboriginal amateur boxer must steal enough to keep her alive until the birth.

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    Added an answer on July 24, 2016 at 1:50 pm

    My view of indicating a character flaw in a logline is that it should be related to the objective goal such that it creates anxiety and uncertainty as to whether he will achieve the goal. ?If being hot-headed increases the risk of his getting caught stealing the drug, okay. I also thought of insertiRead more

    My view of indicating a character flaw in a logline is that it should be related to the objective goal such that it creates anxiety and uncertainty as to whether he will achieve the goal. ?If being hot-headed increases the risk of his getting caught stealing the drug, okay.

    I also thought of inserting the word “indigent” to indicate he’s not just poor, he’s broke.

    I was thinking it would be easier to steal the money to buy the drug than to steal the drug. ?But if you’ve figured out how he could steal it from a pharmacy, again and again, okay.

    Maybe something like:
    When his pregnant wife?s cancer medication is no longer free, an indigent, hot-headed Aboriginal resorts to stealing the drug to keep her alive long enough to deliver their baby.
    (29 words)

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