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  1. Posted: July 18, 2016In: SciFi

    In search of her origins, a confused young woman learns her father may have been a Decorated War Vet, however not from earth, now she finds herself in a fight to survive against a relentless alien warrior and a greedy corporation after her unique DNA

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 20, 2016 at 6:49 am

    So, the female protagonist is technically a hybrid. ?She is the beneficiary of hybrid vigor -- she exhibits desirable traits greater than the sum of the parent species -- genetic synergism. ?So the offspring of humans who are cross-bred with aliens results in ?uber-warriors, better fighters than anyRead more

    So, the female protagonist is technically a hybrid. ?She is the beneficiary of hybrid vigor — she exhibits desirable traits greater than the sum of the parent species — genetic synergism. ?So the offspring of humans who are cross-bred with aliens results in ?uber-warriors, better fighters than any that can be bred within the species, homo sapiens.

    What’s in it for the aliens? ?What do they gain by cross-breeding with humans that they can’t get by intrabreeding?

    Are both species trying to breed a superior warrior hybrid?

    And if so, why would the alien want to kill the protagonist? Get a sample of her blood, yes. ?Take her captive as a human guinea pig, yes, for further evaluation and testing for?their breeding program. ?But kill her outright? ?It seems to me she’s too valuable of a specimen to wantonly kill.

    It seems to me that the stakes for her is not her life directly or immediately — but her freedom. ?Both species want to exploit her as a guinea pig for their own malevolent purposes.

    I’m try to understand what the stakes are for both species, why they both want to get a hold of her. What her (involuntary) role is in their plots.

    One thing I am fairly certain of is that there must be no uncertainty in the logline as to her parentage, her unique genetic makeup. ?The dramatic question is not whether she’s a hybrid species but what she must do about being a hybrid species.

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  2. Posted: July 18, 2016In: SciFi

    In search of her origins, a confused young woman learns her father may have been a Decorated War Vet, however not from earth, now she finds herself in a fight to survive against a relentless alien warrior and a greedy corporation after her unique DNA

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    Added an answer on July 20, 2016 at 3:04 am

    What is the alien's objective goal in hunting her down? ?To kill her? ?Or...? ? And why?[And are you thinking of the character in terms of franchise potential?]

    What is the alien’s objective goal in hunting her down? ?To kill her? ?Or…? ? And why?

    [And are you thinking of the character in terms of franchise potential?]

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  3. Posted: July 18, 2016In: SciFi

    In search of her origins, a confused young woman learns her father may have been a Decorated War Vet, however not from earth, now she finds herself in a fight to survive against a relentless alien warrior and a greedy corporation after her unique DNA

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    Added an answer on July 19, 2016 at 10:48 pm

    >>> inherits her fathers abilities plus a few new skillsSuch as...? ?What are the defining characteristics that makes her the character of interest to both aliens and corporations? (And, ergo, a character of interest to producers, directors and actors.)

    >>> inherits her fathers abilities plus a few new skills

    Such as…? ?What are the defining characteristics that makes her the character of interest to both aliens and corporations? (And, ergo, a character of interest to producers, directors and actors.)

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