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After a empath singer offers to be a surrogate to her long time best friend, who struggles to conceive. She must overcome her guilt when she is told she could not conceive a child of her own due to her actions, and find the ability to accept her boyfriend’s desire to marry her, or lose him forever.
>>>Honestly, I wanted to tackle the relationship more between the protagonist and her boyfriend, Okay.? I like that.? Now tighten up the logline, focus on the conflict it creates in their relationship. But I suggest there needs to be some clarification.? By surrogate, do you mean she carrieRead more
>>>Honestly, I wanted to tackle the relationship more between the protagonist and her boyfriend,
Okay.? I like that.? Now tighten up the logline, focus on the conflict it creates in their relationship.
But I suggest there needs to be some clarification.? By surrogate, do you mean she carries the fertilized egg of her friend’s significant other (or sperm donor). Or….?
And the decision can’t be impulsive, on the spot and then smash cut– she’s in surrogate mode.? It will cost mucho dinero.? Who’s paying.? The whole arrangement will need to be vetted through a lawyer.? Just in case either party gets cold feet.
Also, any candidate for surrogacy has to go through a thorough medical checkup.? Also undergo psychological counseling to ensure that’s she’s emotionally stable and has considered the immediate and long term consequences.? Like how her boyfriend feels about it.
IOW: the conflict in their relationship would begin an escalate before she even becomes a surrogate.
Hmm.? Maybe the romantic complications could ensue when she becomes romantically involved after becoming a surrogate.? In the first trimester, while most guys are clueless.
Whatever, I agree with you that the relationship angle has more dramatic potential.
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I like the notion of a cultural collision.However, as mikepedley85 said about proper names and a clear-cut protagonist, etc.Further, I don't see a clear chain of cause and effect leading to a "High Noon" reckoning between the singer and sheriff.? I can see how they may collide culturally, but I failRead more
I like the notion of a cultural collision.
However, as mikepedley85 said about proper names and a clear-cut protagonist, etc.
Further, I don’t see a clear chain of cause and effect leading to a “High Noon” reckoning between the singer and sheriff.? I can see how they may collide culturally, but I fail to see how that devolves into a potentially lethal “law & order” fight.? What exactly does the singer do that provokes a “law & order” reaction from the sheriff?
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Yep, confusing. Seems like she's already one of them.
Yep, confusing. Seems like she’s already one of them.
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