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When a traumatised Vietnam vet escapes arrest in a small town and takes to the hills, he must use all of his combat skills to evade a sadistic sheriff and his deputies.
When a highly decorated Vietnam veteran is unjustly arrested and abused by a sadistic sheriff, he escapes and flees to the wilderness where he must use his survival skills to fight off the pursuing officers. (35 words) First Blood (1982) I phrased the logline to spotlight the topical issue around thRead more
When a highly decorated Vietnam veteran is unjustly arrested and abused by a sadistic sheriff, he escapes and flees to the wilderness where he must use his survival skills to fight off the pursuing officers.
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First Blood (1982)
I phrased the logline to spotlight the topical issue around the time of the movie’s release, how Vietnam vets didn’t get the respect and appreciation ?they felt they deserved for fighting a foolish war for a lost cause. ?Particularly since it was not a war of their own choosing — they were drafted, military service being compulsory at the time.
That’s the emotional core the movie tapped into, that created the Rambo film franchise.
See lessA young man, sets out to defend his hometown when the psycho, who 15 years ago killed the young mans father, escapes from the asylum to begin his new murdering spree.
A timid young man must defend his hometown when the psychopath who killed his father 15 years ago escapes from an asylum and begins a new murder spree. (28 words)
A timid young man must defend his hometown when the psychopath who killed his father 15 years ago escapes from an asylum and begins a new murder spree.
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“When he discovers his father will be fired as coach if he doesn’t bring home a championship, a popular quarterback must rally his good looking and talented team to beat the scruffy, overachieving, underdogs that, every year seem to defeat them in the final game.” -Overdogs-
My concern is: ?what is your story really about? ?What is the primary story thread: the comeuppance of the Big Man on Campus (BMOC)? ?Or the rivalry between two schools? ?In either case, it's the same protagonist with almost identical events, but if the primary story line is the rivalry, then it seeRead more
My concern is: ?what is your story really about? ?What is the primary story thread: the comeuppance of the Big Man on Campus (BMOC)? ?Or the rivalry between two schools? ?In either case, it’s the same protagonist with almost identical events, but if the primary story line is the rivalry, then it seems to me that the rival for the girl friend should be someone from that story line — from the rival school.
On the other foot, if the primary story line is about the comeuppance of ?the BMOC. then the rival for the girlfriend can come from either.
And to reiterate, I love the concept. And I hope the grand gesture arises out of who the nerd really is, not who he tries to be. ?
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