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  1. Posted: June 19, 2016In: Comedy

    After a successful suicide attempt, the spirit of a failed actor joins forces with a mediocre comedian to create a Tony-worthy Broadway production.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 20, 2016 at 11:46 am

    In the major league religions, his soul is already damned for having committed suicide .?And this version obscures the fact that he's producing the Broadway show. ? And how can he produce a Broadway show when he's ?dead? ?And why would death take the wager when, in terms of the actor's soul, ?he's aRead more

    In the major league religions, his soul is already damned for having committed suicide .?And this version obscures the fact that he’s producing the Broadway show. ? And how can he produce a Broadway show when he’s ?dead? ?And why would death take the wager when, in terms of the actor’s soul, ?he’s already won?

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  2. Posted: June 18, 2016In: Drama

    When a simple farmer?s daughter is forced to choose the love of a German prisoner or her country?s patriotism she confronts her neighbors’ prejudices in an effort to heal a divided American town.

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    Added an answer on June 20, 2016 at 9:54 am

    She could be well-liked in the Black community. ?And be well-known and have a reputation in the White community as a girl who is a "credit to her race". (Translation: ?She knows her place and doesn't create any problems.)As I suggested earlier, if your overall theme is prejudice, why hold back, whyRead more

    She could be well-liked in the Black community. ?And be well-known and have a reputation in the White community as a girl who is a “credit to her race”. (Translation: ?She knows her place and doesn’t create any problems.)

    As I suggested earlier, if your overall theme is prejudice, why hold back, why pull punches? ?And it makes for a stronger hook. ?It’s not just about An American woman falling in love with a Nazi POW in the deep South but a Black American ?woman.

    And that mixed relationship would generate more conflict: the lovers will be universally censured and persecuted by their peers, ?Whereas if she’s a White woman, he won’t be universally censured and persecuted among his peers. ??But a blonde-haired Aryan, a member of the “master” race, falling in love with a Black woman?

    Also consider that Hollyweird is under greater pressure than ever to diversify casting.

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  3. Posted: June 19, 2016In: Comedy

    After a successful suicide attempt, the spirit of a failed actor joins forces with a mediocre comedian to create a Tony-worthy Broadway production.

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    Added an answer on June 20, 2016 at 9:34 am

    As Richiev said. And there's nothing at stake, no compelling reason why the spirits failed actor and mediocre comedian MUST put on the production. Even in comedy, there's gotta be conflict and there's gotta be stakes.

    As Richiev said.

    And there’s nothing at stake, no compelling reason why the spirits failed actor and mediocre comedian MUST put on the production.

    Even in comedy, there’s gotta be conflict and there’s gotta be stakes.

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