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When a young tribesman is old enough to become a ?man?, he is tasked to kill his first animal, or be outcast in his tribe. After internal debate, he decides not to take the life of an animal and accepts being outcasted in the tribe.
>>>After internal debate, he doesn?t kill the animal and accepts being outcasted in the tribe.Is that how the story ends? ?If so, that part shouldn't be in the logline. ?A logline should raise a dramatic question, but it should never, ever give away the answer to that question, how the storRead more
>>>After internal debate, he doesn?t kill the animal and accepts being outcasted in the tribe.
Is that how the story ends? ?If so, that part shouldn’t be in the logline. ?A logline should raise a dramatic question, but it should never, ever give away the answer to that question, how the story ends.
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Dkpough1:Here's my less-is-more definition of a protagonist. A definition from the point of view of the screenwriter, the one who is the author/creator of the character:The protagonist is the primary character in the plot whom the screenwriter intends the audience to root for.Do your really think JaRead more
Dkpough1:
Here’s my less-is-more definition of a protagonist. A definition from the point of view of the screenwriter, the one who is the author/creator of the character:
The protagonist is the primary character in the plot whom the screenwriter intends the audience to root for.
Do your really think James Cameron wrote the script for “Terminator” intending for the audience to root for either Skynet or its cyborg assassin?
Compare/ contrast with “Terminator 2: ?Judgement Day,” where Cameron wrote the Terminator as a character?he intended the audience root for. ?(And did they ever!)
See lessA lover of all things meat and with selective eating disorder and a christian meets a girl who is a punk rock vegan and an atheist but a pretty punk rocker. She always pressures him to eat veggie burgers and she falls in love with his punk rock friend who everyone thinks is right for her.
Not only what Richiev said, but after expending all those words setting up the carnivore Christian, the logline seems to be about the vegan punk rocker falling in love with some one else.????At 56 words the logline is too long and complicated to figure out what the story is about.
Not only what Richiev said, but after expending all those words setting up the carnivore Christian, the logline seems to be about the vegan punk rocker falling in love with some one else.
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At 56 words the logline is too long and complicated to figure out what the story is about.
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