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  1. Posted: June 7, 2016In: Comedy

    When their marriage falls apart, Greek Gods Hera and Zeus battle each other on Earth for control of Mount Olympus

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    Added an answer on June 7, 2016 at 11:49 pm

    Send them to couple's therapy.

    Send them to couple’s therapy.

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  2. Posted: June 7, 2016In: Drama

    When a timeworn pro-wrestler is demoted to a developmental program, he begins an affair with his boss?s daughter to salvage his otherwise flourishing career.

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    Added an answer on June 7, 2016 at 10:29 pm

    As Nir Shelter said.Given that wrestling is a rigged ?game, more spectacle ?than sport, I don't see how deliberately having an affair with the boss's daughter improves his prospects. ?The logline needs to cover the contingency that the boss would disapprove of the affair which would only make the wrRead more

    As Nir Shelter said.

    Given that wrestling is a rigged ?game, more spectacle ?than sport, I don’t see how deliberately having an affair with the boss’s daughter improves his prospects. ?The logline needs to cover the contingency that the boss would disapprove of the affair which would only make the wrestler’s predicament worse.

    For that matter, what is the boss boss of? The wrestling federation?

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  3. Posted: June 4, 2016In: Examples

    English teacher John Keating inspires his students to look at poetry with a different perspective of authentic knowledge and feeling.

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    Added an answer on June 7, 2016 at 10:17 pm

    Nir Shelter:Yes, we will have to respectfully disagree. ?I appreciate the time you've taken to courteously spar on the issue.I agree with you that Todd undergoes more dramatic change in his character than Keating, more than anyone else in the story. ?I think that his story thread serves the dramaticRead more

    Nir Shelter:

    Yes, we will have to respectfully disagree. ?I appreciate the time you’ve taken to courteously spar on the issue.

    I agree with you that Todd undergoes more dramatic change in his character than Keating, more than anyone else in the story. ?I think that his story thread serves the dramatic purpose of salvaging a glimmer of hope in what is otherwise a tragic outcome. ?In the ‘good old days’ of Aristotle, a tragic ending with no glimmer of hope, no character growth spurt (arc of transformation) was good enough. ?Not so in modern drama.

    If Todd is the designated protagonist, what is the resulting logline? ?What is his objective goal? ?What is the dramatic question?

    And, finally, as loglines are a marketing tool, which version do you think would be more effective in selling the ?story were it still only in script form? ?The one “starring” ?Keating or the one “starring” Todd?

    Regards and best wishes.

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