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  1. Posted: June 2, 2016In: War

    Inflicted with PTSD from a young age, a mute street performer is abandoned by his troupe as France becomes occupied by the Nazi Wehrmacht. Faced with the choice to escape to neutral Switzerland or fight, he joins the French Resistance as a code-breaker and infiltrates the Nazi regime. His tactics shift when he learns what?s happening to the countless civilians going missing.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on June 7, 2016 at 1:19 pm

    In real life, people can wander for years, decades, their whole lives with any number of objective goals ?or none at all -- a plotless life.But in reel life-- movies -- the main character is supposed to have an overarching objective goal. ?In other words: ?the character needs a plot. ?There may be aRead more

    In real life, people can wander for years, decades, their whole lives with any number of objective goals ?or none at all — a plotless life.

    But in reel life– movies — the main character is supposed to have an overarching objective goal. ?In other words: ?the character needs a plot. ?There may be any number of subordinate goals on the way to achieving the overarching goal, but there needs to be one overarching goal, a unity of action.

    And that overarching goal unifying the action needs to be identified in the logline.

    Take the justly acclaimed movie “Son of Saul” (2015), set in the Auschwitz death camp in October, 1944. The main character is a Sondercommando, a Jewish prisoner, who in exchange for being allowed to live for a few more months, herds his fellow Jews into the gas chambers. That’s the the setup, the initial situation.

    And then he discovers the body of his illegitimate son in a heap of freshly gassed corpses (Inciting ?Incident). ?He resolves to bury him rather than have his body burn in the ovens. ?(Objective Goal). ? The plot is set in motion.

    Numerous harrowing and horrendous life-and-death events follow and all of them are tied together –unity of action– by the prisoner’s ?objective goal, ?his desperate desire to have his son’s body buried rather than burned. ?Here’s my take on a logline:

    When a Jewish forced laborer, who survives by cremating other Jews in Auschwitz, discovers the body of his son, he struggles to have him buried rather than burned.
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    The unifying action is specific, unambiguous . And the logline ?also performs another function. ?It implicitly raises a dramatic question that the movie will eventually answer. ?In the case of “Son of Saul” the dramatic question is: ?will the Sondercommando succeed in burying his son?

    What dramatic question does your logline raise that the rest of the story will eventually answer?

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  2. Posted: June 6, 2016In: SciFi

    An interstellar hitman is forced together with an intrepid, young archeologist in a race against a ruthless mercenary group to find the legendary fortune of an ancient civilization.

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    Added an answer on June 7, 2016 at 9:05 am

    Essentially it's a story of a treasure hunt in outer space: an odd couple must partner up to find a legendary fortune before some one else does.Unlike the version 1.0, there is now a rival for the loot which should increase dramatic tension and suspension. ?That's an improvement.My problem concernsRead more

    Essentially it’s a story of a treasure hunt in outer space: an odd couple must partner up to find a legendary fortune before some one else does.

    Unlike the version 1.0, there is now a rival for the loot which should increase dramatic tension and suspension. ?That’s an improvement.

    My problem concerns the stakes: ?these days, finding or stealing money or treasure for the sake of the loot is never enough in a movie. ?The principal characters want the money all right– but they also want to use the heist or hunt as a means to accomplish ?something else.

    It seems to me that something more than mere greed for gain should be at stake.

    Take “Ocean’s Eleven” (version 2.0). ?Danny Ocean hasn’t taken a vow of poverty. ?Nor has the man staking Danny, Ruben Tishkoff. ?Both also want more than just the money. ?Ruben wants revenge on Terry Benedict for muscling Ruben out of his casino and then blowing it up. ?Danny wants to win back his ex, Tess. who is now Benedict’s trophy girlfriend.

    So, it seems to me, there needs to be something more at stake than the merely the satisfaction of greed in this story. ?What, I dunno. ?Although the Indiana Jones movies show how treasure hunts can have bigger and more socially redeemable stakes than mere greed.

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  3. Posted: June 6, 2016In: Drama

    A lawsuit for his wife?s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out? until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.

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    Added an answer on June 7, 2016 at 3:19 am

    What does "take a stand" mean? ?How does that translate into a specific objective goal?And I don't recommend including statements about "re-examining values"... "merciless world" ... "human dignity", ?yada-yada. ?If you want to send a message about how lousy and unjust the world is-- use Instagram.Read more

    What does “take a stand” mean? ?How does that translate into a specific objective goal?

    And I don’t recommend including statements about “re-examining values”… “merciless world” … “human dignity”, ?yada-yada. ?If you want to send a message about how lousy and unjust the world is– use Instagram. ?It doesn’t belong in a logline.

    I mean no disrespect for your passion for social justice nor am I discounting the seriousness of being homeless. ?As I said, I know first hand what it’s like. ?I’m ?just saying.

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