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In 1915, after a promising Australian sprinter spurns athletic glory for military glory by enlisting in the Great War, he must survive the carnage of the doomed Gallipoli campaign in Turkey.
DylanK The logline I wrote is for the same 1981 film. ?What you cited from IMDB is the blurb. ?Blurbs are targeted at movie viewers. ?Loglines are targeted ?at movie makers, the money men and producers who finance and package movie projects. ?Different audiences with different interests. (And althouRead more
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The logline I wrote is for the same 1981 film. ?What you cited from IMDB is the blurb. ?Blurbs are targeted at movie viewers. ?Loglines are targeted ?at movie makers, the money men and producers who finance and package movie projects. ?Different audiences with different interests.
(And although ?Mel Gibson was the up and coming star, ?Mark Lee actually had the role of the main character; the film is framed around his story arc.)
Blurbs are designed to tease movie viewers into investing a couple of hours and ?$12-$15 dollars in watching the film. ?Loglines are designed to interest movie makers in investing 2 ?(or more) years of the lives and millions of dollars in producing the film.
See lessA teenage girl?s life is thrown into chaos when her father dies and her social worker demands a bribe to keep her out of foster care.
The logline sets up a situation, and an inciting incident with great potential for conflict and complications. ?Good. ?But it needs at least one more element to do what a logline ?is supposed to do: outline a plot. ?What is missing is an objective goal for the protagonist. ?A protagonist must be?proRead more
The logline sets up a situation, and an inciting incident with great potential for conflict and complications. ?Good. ?But it needs at least one more element to do what a logline ?is supposed to do: outline a plot. ?What is missing is an objective goal for the protagonist. ?A protagonist must be?proactive, not reactive or passive in the face of the problem the antagonist throws at them.
So what becomes the teenager’s proactive objective goal as a result of the social worker’s demand/threat? ?What is her game plan do defeat the social worker and survive without having going into foster care?
See lessWhen a flippant prankster is ripped off by crazy scammer he seeks compensation but inadvertently starts a relationship with the scammer?s even crazier assistant.
It isn't a story about a man falling in love with the principal character who scammed him. But it would make for a more interesting premise if it were. ?Drop the middle man, the crazy scammer. She scams a mark. ?The mark falls in love with her. ?Crazy love.
It isn’t a story about a man falling in love with the principal character who scammed him.
But it would make for a more interesting premise if it were. ?Drop the middle man, the crazy scammer.
She scams a mark. ?The mark falls in love with her. ?Crazy love.
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