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A lawsuit for his wife?s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out? until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.
It's an ensemble story. ?For the purpose of the plotting and a logline, even ensemble stories may benefit from having ?a "first among equals", a primary character. ?In this case, it could be one character who makes it his cause and responsibility to organize the group, keep them alive for the duratiRead more
It’s an ensemble story. ?For the purpose of the plotting and a logline, even ensemble stories may benefit from having ?a “first among equals”, a primary character. ?In this case, it could be one character who makes it his cause and responsibility to organize the group, keep them alive for the duration.
And to be homeless and destitute is to have an objective goal of merely surviving until the next day. ( I know; been there, done that.) ?It would be more obvious, however, and more dramatically compelling if they were on the streets rather than in a train station — if they had no place to take shelter from adverse circumstances ?like (as I suggested earlier) a blizzard.
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When his grandson's murderer is acquitted, a mobster comes out of retirement to get revenge on the murderer and the corrupt politicians who fixed the trial. (26 words)
When his grandson’s murderer is acquitted, a mobster comes out of retirement to get revenge on the murderer and the corrupt politicians who fixed the trial.
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A lawsuit for his wife?s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out? until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.
That they are homeless is the cause of their predicament; it's why they end up in a train station; they have no where else to dwell.However, I'm not so sure about them taking up temporary residence in a train station (unless it is an abandoned). ?If the story is set in U.S., ?generally speaking theyRead more
That they are homeless is the cause of their predicament; it’s why they end up in a train station; they have no where else to dwell.
However, I’m not so sure about them taking up temporary residence in a train station (unless it is an abandoned). ?If the story is set in U.S., ?generally speaking they would be considered vagrants. ?They might be able to loiter during the cay, but they would not allowed to stay overnight.
Why not leave them homeless on the street during a blizzard?
Setting it around the Xmas holiday season is okay; ?the story plays on the sentiments of the season.
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