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The pro-justice covert rodent group, Anonymouse, hacks the Rat Mob?s plans, but when the Rats get wind of the hackers the mice must scurry underground to prevent the rat mobsters from following through on their nefarious baby mouse smuggling ring.
Personally, I feel that names of characters and/or organizations tend to take away from your logline. I feel you can say more with an adjective than a name. However, I see why you did it (to point out that you're talking about mice and rats). I'll be honest the logline is confusing, because I'm notRead more
Personally, I feel that names of characters and/or organizations tend to take away from your logline. I feel you can say more with an adjective than a name. However, I see why you did it (to point out that you’re talking about mice and rats). I’ll be honest the logline is confusing, because I’m not sure who’s the protagonist or the antagonist. There’s really no one protagonist to which the reader can root for.
See lessWhen a delusional shut-in discovers that his favorite webcam model has been kidnapped, he must utilize his detective skills to locate her before she becomes another victim of a rampant madman.
I struggled whether to go with computer skills or detective skills. I suppose computer skills would be a better fit for his computer skills. However, I want to paint him as a novice detective like a really bad, novice detective.
I struggled whether to go with computer skills or detective skills. I suppose computer skills would be a better fit for his computer skills. However, I want to paint him as a novice detective like a really bad, novice detective.
See lessAfter an explosion, a marine wakes up in a place with other people from different times, his mission is to lead the group to recover artifacts spread in different times in history and avoid an alien invasion in the future.
After reading this logline, I was blown away -- pun intended. There seems to be a lot more than a 90 minute movie can cover. It has a Lost feel to it with aliens thrown in the mix. I personally think you should go the TV series route, because based on this logline, you'll have plenty of characters,Read more
After reading this logline, I was blown away — pun intended. There seems to be a lot more than a 90 minute movie can cover. It has a Lost feel to it with aliens thrown in the mix. I personally think you should go the TV series route, because based on this logline, you’ll have plenty of characters, time periods, the 1st explosion, etc.to develop.
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