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Posted: January 23, 2014In: Public

It's February 1930, just months after Black Tuesday. In light of their financial woes, a small-town mortician and his arrogant wife start murdering the rich to keep their beloved funeral home afloat.

Added an answer on January 24, 2014 at 5:14 am

I really like the idea. It has a unique feel to it. It's something worth writing. As for the logline, it could use some work. There's no need for the date; you could say Depression and we would understand your time period. I'm not sure of the protagonist and antagonist. Excellent concept, poor logliRead more

I really like the idea. It has a unique feel to it. It’s something worth writing. As for the logline, it could use some work. There’s no need for the date; you could say Depression and we would understand your time period. I’m not sure of the protagonist and antagonist. Excellent concept, poor logline.

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It's February 1930, just months after Black Tuesday. In light of their financial woes, a small-town mortician and his arrogant wife start murdering the rich to keep their beloved funeral home afloat.

With time-traveling capabilities, the FBI sends a self-centered agent to observe and report the gruesome murders of a prominent family, but as his feelings begin to change will he have the strength to leave the past alone.