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When a female book editor visits the home of a horror writer she finds that all of his creations are holding him hostage.
Nobody can really write your logline for you because you're the only one who truly knows your story, but I'm going to give it a go: "A newly appointed and downtrodden female book editor must rescue her agency's most coveted horror writer when she discovers that his monstrous creations are holding hiRead more
Nobody can really write your logline for you because you’re the only one who truly knows your story, but I’m going to give it a go:
“A newly appointed and downtrodden female book editor must rescue her agency’s most coveted horror writer when she discovers that his monstrous creations are holding him hostage.”
At least this version contains many of the required story elements that need to go into a logline: main character + flaw; goal; antagonist/obstacle; theme; stakes.
Good luck with a rewrite…
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Agree, this is far too vague and doesn't give us an idea of what the story is about. What is the sexy movie producer's goal and what's stopping him from achieving it? Begin with these questions when rewriting your logline and your story (and logline) will gain greater shape and focus.
Agree, this is far too vague and doesn’t give us an idea of what the story is about. What is the sexy movie producer’s goal and what’s stopping him from achieving it? Begin with these questions when rewriting your logline and your story (and logline) will gain greater shape and focus.
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