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Dumped by her wealthy boyfriend, a selfish gold-digger retreats to her hometown and sets her sights on a local bachelor…who happens to be rich…and engaged to be married.
I can see great potential for this comedy. What goes wrong when this gold digger tries to reel in the local bachelor? You should drop a hint of what her conflict is going to be so potential viewers/readers become invested in this comedy.
I can see great potential for this comedy. What goes wrong when this gold digger tries to reel in the local bachelor? You should drop a hint of what her conflict is going to be so potential viewers/readers become invested in this comedy.
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Hmm, interesting angle making the Army reject disgruntled. At the moment I'm finishing up the book but it feels a little flat in the conflict department, so I'm thinking about adding some type of sub-Earth species living in the deep. I wrote the book as a hero's journey for the Army reject who goesRead more
Hmm, interesting angle making the Army reject disgruntled. At the moment I’m finishing up the book but it feels a little flat in the conflict department, so I’m thinking about adding some type of sub-Earth species living in the deep. I wrote the book as a hero’s journey for the Army reject who goes from lost in the world to big-time hero. The pipes weren’t deep at all. The bus lands in a pocket adjacent to a water table, making rescue efforts very difficult. Survivors actually find water that is leaking from this water table, but the few who drink the water are poisoned. FDNY does deserve some glory. Do you agree that if there is no leader among the survivors the story will suffer?
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Absolutely. There is a young Army reject who is searching for some purpose in his life. This will be, of course, his moment to step up and do something big with his life. I finished the novel already, but I think it's lacking that extra spice. This is why I'm writing some creatures from the deep intRead more
Absolutely. There is a young Army reject who is searching for some purpose in his life. This will be, of course, his moment to step up and do something big with his life. I finished the novel already, but I think it’s lacking that extra spice. This is why I’m writing some creatures from the deep into the story, then I’ll try to sell this puppy to the studios.
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