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Untitled urban fantasy
They are dealt a huge blow when they find out a rescue may take weeks due to toxic gases near the surface, and the collapsed asphalt. And then, to make matters worse, they discover that they are not alone down there. I'm writing in some kind of creatures that live below the surface of the Earth, I jRead more
They are dealt a huge blow when they find out a rescue may take weeks due to toxic gases near the surface, and the collapsed asphalt. And then, to make matters worse, they discover that they are not alone down there. I’m writing in some kind of creatures that live below the surface of the Earth, I just don’t know what they look like just yet. This is the fantasy part. How would I include these monsters from the deep into the logline, without making it too wordy?? Any thoughts?
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Cool idea. In the first line, I would use "from" instead of "in" and the last sentence is a fragment. Rewrite it if possible and you're onto something.
Cool idea. In the first line, I would use “from” instead of “in” and the last sentence is a fragment. Rewrite it if possible and you’re onto something.
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Interesting subject. I would lose the "when in" part and find a way to rewrite the last line without using parenthesis.
Interesting subject. I would lose the “when in” part and find a way to rewrite the last line without using parenthesis.
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